FIC: All Summer It Hurt to Look at You (SVU, Elliot/Kathy, Elliot/Olivia)

Mar 23, 2006 12:19

Title: All Summer It Hurt to Look at You
Fandom: Law & Order: SVU
Pairings: Elliot/Kathy, Elliot/Olivia
Rating: PG
Summary: The summer our marriage failed we picked sage to sweeten our hot dark car.

*** )

elliot/kathy, olivia benson, fanfic: svu, fanfiction, het, elliot/olivia, law & order: svu, kathy stabler, elliot stabler

Leave a comment

Comments 57

Great piece! anonymous March 23 2006, 10:24:03 UTC
First time here, and I wanted to say that I enjoyed your story!

Reply

Re: Great piece! annakovsky March 24 2006, 17:59:12 UTC
Thanks so much!

Reply


moireach March 23 2006, 10:54:33 UTC
I love this so so so much. It makes my heart *hurt*. How everything is kind of normal and hopeless and nothing is any sexier or flashier than reality is. And it makes me want it to be summer, and it makes me feel lonely.

And that last LINE!

Reply

annakovsky March 24 2006, 17:59:57 UTC
Oh, thank you! I wish it were summer too - packing t-shirts is making me think about last summer of AWESOMENESS and how this one will clearly be even better.

Reply


p_inkjeans March 23 2006, 11:09:31 UTC
This story was just ... I loved it. I love the comparisons between Olivia and Kathy, like when Elliot thinks that Olivia would yell back at him, or when in the middle of his first kiss with Olivia, you described his first kiss with Kathy. And I absolutely loved how in character and real this was. Great job!! I hope to see more from you.

Reply

annakovsky March 24 2006, 18:00:15 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm so glad you liked it.

(Also, HA! Icon.)

Reply


amerella March 23 2006, 11:20:22 UTC
Oh, man. I love this. I love how he regrets kissing her before he even does it but he does it anyway and then he wants to do it again. And I love the last line. I may possibly be dead from loving this now.

Reply

annakovsky March 24 2006, 18:00:36 UTC
Oh, thanks so much! That means a ton to me. :-)

Reply


cheapmetaphor March 23 2006, 11:49:25 UTC
I have never even seen the show, but I still loved this.

Reply

annakovsky March 24 2006, 18:00:46 UTC
Oh man, thanks!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up