A Succession of Small Mistakes (Elliot/Olivia, SVU)

[annakovsky]

So sloanesomething and I started tagging back and forth and ended up writing a 7800 word story. Uh, whoops? This goes AU during the episode "Risk".

Title: A Succession of Small Mistakes
Fandom: Law & Order: SVU
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Benson/Stabler
Summary: Elliot and Olivia go undercover and have trouble keeping it together. Set during "Risk".

Comments

[annakovsky]

Thanks so much!

[swmbo]

Omg, angstmuffin!!!

WOot. UNDERCOVER WORK! Pun intended. *wiggles eyebrows*

SVU: Angstiest fandom in the planet. *squishes them all*

[annakovsky]

Yay! Thanks, Swm!

[ros_fod]

"Tell me to stop," he says, and he doesn't recognize his own voice, and even as he talks he's pulling out of her, too slowly, and she's digging her heels against his back, and he jerks his arms against the mattress, shakes her, reminds her that he was talking. "Tell me to stop," he says, and he can't hardly breathe, and he's begging her.

She opens her eyes and looks at him like she'd look at a rapist.

"Fuck you," she says, and grips his waist, uses him for leverage to push against him, sinks into him, too fast, and she grits her teeth and grabs the bed but she doesn't give, not an inch, and he fucking loves her to death.

Christ.

I hope you realize that I haven't read het sex since 2002.

I loved this. I don't even watch this stupid show! But seriously, the way you weaved this story, the tension of the case bleeding into the sex and then the sex coloring the case, the humor and the failed attempts at humor, the longing. Oh, god, the longing. The inevitability and the surprise of it all.

[annakovsky]

omg you make me so happy, Rosalind! I am so so pleased you liked it! Especially since you are the queen of porn. <3333333

[fabularasa]

Wow, this was amazing. I have always thought there was some serious chemistry there, but oh, the heartbreak. And hot het sex, mmmm. Enough to make me think it can be done, after all. This was spectacular.

[annakovsky]

Thanks so much!

[ultraviolet730]

I always want to leave a long, quote-y review, but then I don't have time or I feel stalkerish. So I'm going to take a page from your writing style and try to be brief: Sexy. Angsty. Clever. Tense. Hot.

Nice, job, as usual. I was afraid you'd guys had abandoned the AU game. But you're back and better than ever!

ps Extra props for mocking the Tracksuit of Shame from the episode.
pps Rick is on USA tonight
ppps Clearly, I cannot be brief.

[annakovsky]

I'm so glad you liked it! And omg, it's on tonight? HOTTEST EPISODE EVER.

Also, please, long and stalkery feedback is THE BEST KIND.