Friday at the sandbox - Part 12 "A shot in the dark

[annabirmingham]

Summary - Modern day AU/AU. Ennis, Jack, kids, a playground...

Warnings - none
Length - c400 words
Feedback - yes please!

The 'beer date' took an intimate turn when Jack took the plunge...

Comments

[annabirmingham]

I agree, I want their first time to be special and not to just get down and dirty in a park. I think a 'home date' might be in order soon!
Anna x

[sliveredmoon]

I'm glad they stopped. Don't want them in some furtive encounter in a dark corner. Jack senses something major is happening. Bet Ennis does too.

Great chapter. (fans self!)

[annabirmingham]

Thanks! Yes, I think both guys are aware that they are heading down a one way street - with no hope of return! Probably best that they go slow and take their time to enjoy the scenery :)
Anna x

[george66]

This is the first chapter of this story I've read in which I thought to myself, "Oh Anna, can'tcha give us like four hundred more words before ending this one!" LMFAO!!!

Loved it when Ennis breathlessly called Jack sexy while grabbing him by the booty. I loved the fact they were acting like a bunch of horny teenagers who almost got caught by the police. Too funny!!

Then both of them walking back to Jack's car suddenly all shy. Ahhh...Precious.

Yes, no question, our boys are definitely feeling one another is a serious way. Of course, of course!!

george

[annabirmingham]

George, I love you!! LOL!
You know what it's like after you've kissed someone - especially when you've probably done more than you should in a place where you shouldn't. Heheh. No wonder they were feeling a bit sheepish...
More soon!
Anna x

[roby100]

I love the guys so much! Going from horny to shy but still wanting each other and trying to set a new date. They are so lovely.
So, for the guys it will be on Friday again! Hope they will have a great time :)
Anyway, shouldn't police "serve and protect"? They just interrupted something good here!

Thanks so much for the updtae.
A big hug
Roby

[annabirmingham]

Thanks Roby!
I think Friday will always be a special day for the boys now - where they met, first 'McDate' etc. and now the first meet-up after the first kiss :)
The police in town are just a little too enthusiastic I feel...
Anna x

[tizi17]

very sweet and at the same time exciting! thank you!

[annabirmingham]

Thanks! Sweet and exciting works for me :)
Anna x