FIC: Champagne from a paper cup (is never quite the same) 1/4

Aug 08, 2011 23:56

Title: Champagne from a paper cup (is never quite the same) 1/4
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin, with Gwaine/Elena, Morgana/Leon and a mention of Gwen/Lancelot
Rating: NC-17 overall
Word Count: ~38,000
Spoilers/Warnings: None.
Summary: Modern AU with magic. Arthur is a professional footballer on the verge of making history. Merlin is a medical student ( Read more... )

fan fiction, big bang 2011, rating: nc-17, merlin, pairing: merlin/arthur

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yenny2206 August 9 2011, 23:28:20 UTC
What a wonderful story. Rough start for Merlin/Arthur though!

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brunettepet August 13 2011, 14:33:07 UTC
Excellent job setting up the characters in this chapter. Merlin is in character and I love how wide eyed and open he is. His admission to everyone that he doesn't follow football and Camelot wouldn't be the team he followed if he did showed he's no fanboy (though he really is a bit).

Arthur's staring and Merlin's magic bucking under his skin were a bit disconcerting, but Merlin got into a rhythm after the introductions were made and his enthusiasm about being on the pitch was lovely.

Things were going swimmingly until Merlin happened upon the three footballers teasing that assistant. Merlin standing up to Arthur was a thing of beauty. Arthur was being a jerk, both to the assistant and then to Merlin, he totally deserved that black eye. His jerkish behavior was tempered by him standing up for Merlin, though.

I love that Elena is Merlin's BFF here. That scene where she chugged Merlin's beer had me laughing. I'm looking forward to her meeting Gwaine. I bet they'd have a great time together!

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sunny_rainfall August 14 2011, 22:58:13 UTC
lovely :D

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asherlev1 August 20 2011, 21:06:32 UTC
OMG, I SQUEALED LIKE AN IDIOT WHEN MERLIN PUSHED ARTHUR BACK.

BOYS <3

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basicallyrunn May 2 2012, 12:29:50 UTC
This might be possibly one of my favourite fics...
I'm actually excited to be clicking the next part

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