Comments | ann89103: One Sentence Fic: Bleach, Weiss Kruez

ann89103

One Sentence Fic: Bleach, Weiss Kruez

Aug 01, 2009 11:52

More one sentence fic. The first three were written for the pain challenge at 1sentencepr0n, which is ongoing until Aug. 7, for any of you interested in participating. Rated NC-17 overall for smut, posted in order of writing. The first one has a non-con warning ( Read more... )

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Comments 6

mainekosama August 2 2009, 06:24:37 UTC

You do know how to put a lot of content in not many words! Those were all great. Scary, but great. I especially love the second Kazeshini one (because we know it and it would be terrifying - those little filler sword impersonation suggers sooo much about the characters).

And the honeyed Schuldig one - short, brutal, to the point, perfect.

ann89103 August 2 2009, 06:40:27 UTC

Thanks! Such is the power of the run-on sentence! :D

Current Bleach manga storyline and filler!anime arc are working together to suggest some tantalizing possibilities for many characters, especially Hisagi and Kazeshini, even if the filler!spirits are just human manifestations released by the villain, and not their true forms.

I still lurve me some evil, but suffering Schuldig!

mainekosama August 2 2009, 06:52:34 UTC

Hey! I'm Salavic, we don't believe in such concepts as run-on sentences. It's all aaaaaaart :p.

I just noticed some right obvious things - "Rukia" is not short, "Hitsugaya" is not a kid, "Ikkaku" is not bald :p. And, of course, "Haisagi" is not exactly sane - but then he's the one who's having problems "accepting himself" if we get all freudian ;-). The best thing for me was that they didn't put some dainty flower maiden for "Kuchiki" - I trample on the fandom conventions, buahahahaha :p.

ann89103 August 2 2009, 07:07:03 UTC

Oooh, artistic license, I like it!

It's almost as if the human forms of the zanpackuto are what the shinigami either want to be or see themselves as. In that case Hisagi is truly fucked, lol. Ukitake has some real issues with children, and Shunsui's has some killer hooker!shoes. Naturally, Mayuri is the freakiest one of all.

I've never understood the whole 'Kuchiki as dainty sakura princess' fandom concept. Keep on stampling the whole lot of fandom conventions, I say!

mainekosama August 2 2009, 07:44:55 UTC

Oh, yes the shoes... Those were magnificent ;-)!

And between your writing and this new arc I'm getting addicted to Hisagi, hahaha. I need an icon now :p.

ann89103 August 2 2009, 08:08:18 UTC

I've loaded up on lots of Bleach icons now, mostly from the aptly named bleach_icons.

Once I've seen more of the new manga chapters and the filler!anime, I suspect more writing will be done. Hate to do it now, and then have canon mess with my mind. As it is, my more usual cool, cerebral version of Hisagi is going to need some fine-tuning.