Distortion

[anknick]

Title: Distortion

Chapters: One-shot

Author: anknick

Genre: Angst, smut, romance

Pairing: Aoi x Uruha (Yuu x Kouyou)

Rating: NC-17

Warning: ManxMan, violence, language, sex

Comments: About the title, I didn't know what to use but then Ibitsu's preview helped me and I stole the name XDD

Comments

[toesjah]

This was nice for a oneshot :) full of sadness, distress and love. I love the smut even though it could be with a little more details ^^ -professional pervert- xD

And I have some advise for you, try to use Caps lock a little less. Use a exclamation mark instead (just some advise)

In the beginning it was not very clear to me, but you picked it up very nicely :)

[anknick]

I should really give up on writing.. it's not my thing..
About the smut, i shouldn't have put the genre as smut, because i don't really like putting in details.. Thats the way i like to write it..
And honestly, i get bored..
The plot sucks.. Tht too i know.. XD
I never know what will happen in my fics.. Starts with an impulse and then i go on as my head goes..
Thanks for reading..
I am a bit depressed right now..
Because my college starts soon and so i have leave from home tomorrow T___T

[toesjah]

Well you should most definitely not give up writing if you enjoy it. And stories can be fun without smut too :)

And the plot doesn't suck, it's sweet.

And I write exactly the same as you. I also write whatever pops up in my mind when I'm writing xD

Aw, you will survive.. keep your head up :) Next week I have to start working again x__x I really don't want to.

[anknick]

I like to write about sex lol but not with as much details..
I should really write drabbles.. XD
And the plot.. I know it could have been clearer.. It's mostly because i hadn' thought what had happened to make things this way.. And so i had to clear up whatever i could in the end..
Meh.. I feel useless..

[deadlyscarlet]

this really was a beautiful..so many overflowing emotions...poor Uru being raped like tat..but a tleast Aoi healed him and helped him get over it..hopefully they can live a peaceful life from now on...

[anknick]

I hope too.. and i'm sorry if the story's not totally clear.. what i realised is that I think I forgot to mention what EXACTLY happened to Uru..
Anyway.. thanks for reading and commenting!