Desperate Times, McShep, NC-17

[ankhmutes]

Desperate Times
NC-17
McShep
Spoilers: nope
Season/Ep: any and none
PWP? I don't think I can do these without some plot. Also, First Time (cuz I love those)

Summary: The first kiss was firm, dry, a statement of intentions. He moved his hands to cradle John's face and noted with satisfaction that John had let his P-90 fall to do the same to him.

Comments

[garneteve]

OMG!!!
That was really good....
but the twist at the end....ngh!
I'd like to know if you're planning to write a sequal to this, I'd love to read one.

[ankhmutes]

Uh, no, no sequel planned. I don't even know what Rodney is saving John from. This just kinda sprang from my brain and had to be written. I'm glad you enjoyed it, though.

NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[yinkawills]

Brilliant! Hot!

But you cant leave it there!

Re: NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[ankhmutes]

but, but, but... I don't know what happens next! If someone else has any idea, they can finish it (just let me know).

[anonymous]

Quite apart from the "OMG HOT!!!" this managed to squeeze in a good measure of angsty drama too. Just what was John supposed to be doing that Rodney saved him from? Obviously something dangerous if Rodney's need to a) say something before it was too late and b) hijack John's place was anything to go by. Will he survive and will John ever speak to him again?

Oh, and in case it wasn't clear before; OMG HOT!!!!! *g*.

Laura.

[ankhmutes]

well, if it warmed you up, my job is done. ::grin:: Truth is, the 'angsty drama' is just a side effect, I have no idea what Rodney is going off to do, just that it's dangerous. Ripped the idea off of a movie (can you guess which one/what scene?) just took it further. Anyway, glad you enjoyed it. Guess I oughta come up with a title and archive it after all... didn't think it was good enough to warrant the trouble.

[adafrog]

Oh wow. Well done.

[kitt]

Ouch! Really, really fantastic mind you, but also, ouch!

Also, I totally want resolution. More! =D