That... was WONDERFUL. It's been so long since I read a Prince of Tennis fic, but I saw the Davide/Bane pairing, and could not resist. Your writing really is lovely-- the whole story was so funny to read XD.
Have you written anymore Davide/Bane, perchance? Or anything else at all? *wants to read more of your brilliance XD*
*grins* Thank you so much for giving it a chance even though you're not all about the PoT anymore! Sadly I have not yet written any more of these boys, but I am sure I will. They're way too much fun not to.
I loved this story when I first read it on the yuletide smut exchange and, now that it has had time to "settle", still find it a pleasure to read.
Saeki is beautifully drawn. We know his visual perception is faster than average from the series, but I really appreciate how you've drawn that out to more subtle forms of observation, that he sees things about people which the Banes and Davides and others completely miss. He really needs someone as sharp and on the ball as he is. The possibilities of pairing him off with K. R. are quite interesting. *smile*
The ending is electric. The moment when Davide says "I'll take that" was the ultimate freeze-shot short story pivot. I think I was holding my breath. What a great build up to that point! --- And a very steamy resolution. You write sex scenes so well.
I am so delighted you enjoyed this! I agree that Saeki does need someone very sharp, and although I love Saeki and Bane together, Saeki and Ryou would make quite an interesting pair. XD
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Oh, boys. So silly, and so hot at the same time.
*pets poor wise lovelorn Sae*
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Thank you! ♥
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Awwww Itt-chan yay!!
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Have you written anymore Davide/Bane, perchance? Or anything else at all? *wants to read more of your brilliance XD*
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not only did you write smut but you wrote band and dabide smut.
i love these two together.
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i just noticed i spelled bane's name wrong.
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Saeki is beautifully drawn. We know his visual perception is faster than average from the series, but I really appreciate how you've drawn that out to more subtle forms of observation, that he sees things about people which the Banes and Davides and others completely miss. He really needs someone as sharp and on the ball as he is. The possibilities of pairing him off with K. R. are quite interesting. *smile*
The ending is electric. The moment when Davide says "I'll take that" was the ultimate freeze-shot short story pivot. I think I was holding my breath. What a great build up to that point! --- And a very steamy resolution. You write sex scenes so well.
Fantastic job!
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Thank you!
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