[fic] the promenade

[chromatic_coma]

Title: the promenade
Author/Artist: chromatic_coma @ animusia
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Hungary-centric, Austria, N.Italy;; mentions Spain, Romano, and France // Austria/Hungary
Rating: PG/K+
Warnings: potential fail!history, human names
Summary: for starlightfairy2 who requested Austria and Hungary's first dance.

Comments

[disownmereturns]

I love how soft and neat things are with these two. Your portrayal makes it so romantic :'3

I especially loved this line tho
“May I have this dance, Miss Elizaveta?” he asks like a proper gentleman, the way someone must have taught him too, but Hungary can hear the teasing tone in his voice. He’s mocking the formality of it, and Hungary can remember a time when they took a break in their housework to dance without the pomp and circumstance of this gathering, when she was in an apron and he had dust on his cheek and they were in Austria’s foyer.

Oh Feliciano, you charmer >///

[chromatic_coma]

Feliciano is too sexy for his sexy ;)

And yeah, I tried to make it soft and dream like so that it would have that romantic vibe ♥

[shibbyone]

I'm dying. This is so effing cute. I effing love them, and this, this is just made of fluff and win. Hungary is my all-time favorite female character and I love seeing her in these high-class situations, it's just so incredible adorable a sweet. So thanks for this <3

[chromatic_coma]

Hee, wow, I'm glad you liked it <3 Thank you for commenting!

[reyechan]

I could imagine that's exactly how it went, too. xD;;

I love this~

[chromatic_coma]

Thank you! >///< ♥

[starlightfairy2]

This is. Oh my. I have no idea why I waited this long to read this but it was so worth it from the way you portrayed the characters, the imagery and the feeling of it all. It's so sweet and fluffy and romantic and ajsfkaksfawsfaf I LOVE THIS PAIRING. ♥ And there's just something absolutely darling about Austria getting flustered and finally letting go in front of Hungary.

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU~

[starlightfairy2]

Ahem, and best coming back surprise ever, y/y? :D

[chromatic_coma]

Hee, your review has made me so happy I've got tinglies all over >3<

I'm so thrilled you liked the fic, hun. I have been waiting to see if it was to your taste and just knowing that you liked it is both a relief and it makes me so giddy!

YOU'RE WELCOME! ♥

[artemis10002000]

Awwww! So cute! This story is so sweet and romantic. I love all the little details that make you smile like Feliciano being such a little charmer, Austria's frazzled composure and Hungary having been given a governess by her boss.

[chromatic_coma]

Hee, so glad you enjoyed it!