[fic] scarred heart in hand [part ii, chapter iii]

[chromatic_coma]

Title: Scarred Heart in Hand
Author/Artist: chromatic_coma @ animusia
Character(s)/Pairing(s): (in this chapter) Prussia, Austria, Hungary, Spain, Germany, N. Italy, S.Italy ;; Austria/Hungary, Germany/Italy, Spain/Romano,
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Friendship, Romance, Slice-of-Life, Angst
Warning(s): Kissing, Swearing, Homosexual Relationships, Original Character, YMMV

Comments

[franceismyhomie]

NOOOOO ANTONIO AND GILBERT DON'T ARGUE /sobs

Bella is so insanely adorable, I think I may explode at how adorable she is. AND WHO IS THAT PERSON?! IS IT FRANCE? WHY DOES HE HAVE COLOURFUL SPLOTCHES ON HIS HAND? Is he like, some random teacher from their past? AGAIN, WHY DOES HE HAVE COLOURFUL SPLOTCHES ON HIS HAND?

/goes into spazz-mode

[chromatic_coma]

THEY HAS TO. MAKING UP FOR LOST TIME, AND ALL THAT!

Hee, I'm glad you think so. She loooooves Ludwig but no one can tell why. In my mind she continues to ask for his advice and depend on him even when she's older XD

I CANNOT TELL YOU HOHO BECAUSE WHY WOULD I RUIN ALL THE FUN?~

[tokene]

o Ao! O-Oh my god Antonio ; A; I can definitely understand why he's angry but I'd never have expected that he would have openly started getting cross at Gil like that. Because, well, he's *Antonio*. O-Oh dear.

But other than that, BELLA! ♥ It's adorable that you've made her immediately like Ludwig of all people :'D And a flustered Ludwig is utterly precious. The poor guy has no idea what to do with her, but she loves him already~

Ahhhh, oh man. I honestly have no idea who's hand would be covered in colourful splotches ahah. I would say Francis (or would that be too timely an entrance?), but I've no idea why his hand would be covered in colours, unless he forgot to wipe away icing or something aha.

Well. The chapter doesn't *feel* like a filler to me, and I'm always happy with any new chapter so :'D Yay! Thanks again~ Can't wait to see who that mystery hand belongs to!

[chromatic_coma]

Yes, well, Gilbert started being hypocritical, and Antonio was trying to hard to hide his annoyance, but I suppose everyone has a snapping point. Plus he was fighting with Toni's hubby, and no one fights Toni's hubby and gets away with it~

In my head it just seemed so perfect that Lovino's darling little baby would love the person he hates most. He can't deny her anything, but it's fun to fluster him xDD And yes, she loves Ludwig because he's warm and calm and his muscles are comfy to nap on and she likes the way he smells :)

Maybe~ We'll see ;)

I dunno, I feel like it's just not very rich in plot. But then, this whole fic moves slowly, huh? At any rate, I am glad you enjoyed it!

[disownmereturns]

My jaw dropped in somewhere here just fkjdhfkgjdh dun arguuue. Also, Bella is insanely adorable, even more so with Ludwig holding her :'333

[chromatic_coma]

Hee, you just keep making incoherent, cute noises, okay? It makes me feel like I've done something right~ ♥

this is my review that you wanted but I'm sure it's not very good

[windweaver1092]

As much as I truly enjoyed this chapter I really can't wait for you to bring FrUk back in (it's my favorite pairing

awwww

[chromatic_coma]

This is an adorable review >////< Thank you so much for reading this fic, Tory, and for loving it so much~

Also, don't worry about FrUK, I've got everything under control. And hell, Gilbert deserves it for being a meanie <33