[fic] scarred heart in hand [part ii, chapter ii]

[chromatic_coma]

Title: Scarred Heart in Hand
Author/Artist: chromatic_coma @ animusia
Character(s)/Pairing(s): (in this chapter) Prussia, Austria, Hungary, Spain, Germany, Italy ;; Austria/Hungary, Germany/Italy, mentioned Spain/Romano, past Prussia/Hungary
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Friendship, Romance, Slice-of-Life, Angst
Warning(s): Kissing, Swearing, Homosexual Relationships, Original

Comments

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[franceismyhomie]

Dude I nearly started crying about Gilbert. Gilbert's behaviour in this just seems like I'd do and I think I almost started crying because that could be me in a few years xD

But omgosh, when he said “Yeah… but I can understand why. With a father like Roddie, he’ll need an awesome guy like me to teach him all the cool stuff.” I think I nearly died - I'm not even lying, but I'm always telling my friends to make me godmother of their children because they need someone awesome to teach their kids how to be cool.

This was such an awesome chapter~! But where's Matthew? GILBERT NEEDS SOMEONE FOR HIMSELF /screams

[chromatic_coma]

*hug* But now you know so you won't let it happen, right? :)

Haha, see, it applies~ And thank you!

[nakedfiction]

I'm still loving this story. I've never been one for the Frying Pangle, but I was happy to see some calm, sweet PruHun dialogue. :3

[chromatic_coma]

Thank you. I'm glad you're not too bored.

[disownmereturns]

Aaaaah ;A; All this through Gil's POV made me wibble, especially how he was feeling before attending the reunion and during his conversation with Elizaveta. You can really see how he knows things have changed and aaaa /sniff

[chromatic_coma]

Yeah, he's sort of naive and wants to pretend nothing will be different even though he knows that's highly unlikely :/

[disownmereturns]

That happens to me sometimes and realizing otherwise is painful ;3;

[chromatic_coma]

Pretty much, yeah. I'm glad you're enjoying it =3=

[tokene]

Oh Gilbert. I loved the realism you injected into this chapter; no one makes all the right decisions in life, and not all of them can be made right again either. But he's back now, attending this reunion, so it's at least a start right? Fight on, Gil ♥

Poor Elizaveta too. It sucks suddenly losing your best friend like that, just when you've come to think that maybe you guys could be more D; I feel like giving them all a great big hug. And on a lighter note: MORE BABIES? 8D 8D /shot

I think you did great, even though I know writing some chapters may be harder than others. The dynamics between Gil and Eliz were great, and you can see that they've both come a long way (separate ways) since we've last seen them. Anyway, good job and thanks again ♥

[chromatic_coma]

I think that's one of the themes of this part; regrets and how you handle them. But Gilbert is here, doing the right thing :)

Ha, Elizaveta's baby won't show up in this fic, but he will get a little more mention before it ends~ And yeah, poor Liz :/

No, thank you for another awesome review *hug*