[fic] Save the Drama for the Stage [7/10]

[chromatic_coma]

Title: Save the Drama for the Stage
Author/Artist: chromatic_coma @ animusia
Character(s)/Pairing(s) [in this chapter]: England, Prussia, Canada, France, Hungary, America, S. Italy,[ N. Italy, Germany, Finland, Sweden, Sealand, Poland, Lithuania, Spain] ; eventual FrUK (?), eventual PrussCan (?), RussAmerica, Austria/Hungary, France/Canada
Genre: Comedy, Drama, Romance

Comments

[chromatic_coma]

Thank you very much <3

[mad_bomber75]

fff I need a sad icon. I think a tear fell when I read the last line. ;___; Oh Arthur. Oh Gilbert.

[chromatic_coma]

I'm sorry. If it makes you feel better, happy endings are coming soon 8D?

Thank you for reading!

[moirae]

I'm liking the parallels between the play and the outer narrative a lot. Especially with the caring younger brother thing in this chapter, since I'm a total sucker for sibling dynamics. Also, the idea of Matt and Al being human and three days apart makes me wince at the idea of their mother going through nearly four days of labor. I also love the way you mentioned that all of Arthur's protagonists have Francis' personality--a nice touch I think, because its so characteristic of writers. :)

[chromatic_coma]

Sibling dynamics = Win. I was so excited to write Lovino as Elizaveta's younger brother. I thought I'd stated it, but Alfred and Matthew are cousins, and not brothers, so worry not for the either woman.

Thank you so much <3

[ichii_lemoncat]

Oh ARTHUR!! Someday you will find love!!

[chromatic_coma]

We'll see~ <3

[ryuu_xi]

When Francis and Arthur quarelled like that I swear, a little of me died inside. D: And Gilbert. Poor, poor Gilbert. So much sadness. D:

Ah, I can't wait for the next chapter!!

[chromatic_coma]

XDD It killed a part of me to have to write it, but at the same time it was pretty interesting.

Yes, poor Gilbert :(

Hehe, I'm already nearly halfway done with it~

[ryuu_xi]

Aww. Lol, although I couldn't but notice, "in every one of the plays you’ve ever written". Maybe I missed something, but, really, Francis? really? You read every one of Arthur's works? Because it feels like Arthur has written quite a lot. :D Feels like closet respect to me. Or maybe it's just me.

Anyway, LOL. I think the little bit that died will hopefully be revived!

[chromatic_coma]

Hehe, yes, Francis has read all of Arthur's plays. Worry not, there are only 3 others... but yes, it is partially to do with respect and partially to do with checking out what kind of writer he'd be acting under xDD

I think it will, no worries~