Breaking Me Down - Chap. 2 NC-17

[rietalienko]

     Jake wandered back to his room after he was done eating. He wondered if Tom - the real Tom that is - knew that he was talking to him and not the Yeerk controlling his every movement. With a sigh, he collapsed on his bed and dreamed of rescuing his brother. He knew they would probably have to keep him in hiding afterward but it would be worth

Comments

[di_glossia]

Well, that was certainly thought-provoking. I liked how you mixed Jake's disgust with his body's unconscious reaction to stimulation and how he began to doubt that Tom cared about him enough to stop Iniss. This was a very well-done rapefic.

[anonymous]

I agree with the other comment; this was very well done! It is a good mix of doubt and instinct. I'm intrigued as to what's going to happen next... what's Jake's plan?

[rietalienko]

That will be in the next chapter~! :D I think...wait no, it's the chapter after. XD;