[ f i c ] Hydrophilia: Dick/Tim - 1/3

[animegoil]

This thing took me forever to finish. It was supposed to be like, 2000 words tops. Yeah right -_-;; Popping my Dick/Tim cherry here *super excited*

Title: Hydrophilia
Fandom: DCU
Pairing: Dick/Tim with gratuitous mentions of Babs, Kory, Roy and Wally.
Rating: PG13
Summary: Tim's affected by one of Ivy's new toxins, but his behavior is worrying enough

Comments

[the_protagonist]

HNGH! I need more of this! You're killing me, love!!!

I like so many parts, but my favorite might be:

It’s the way Tim works - he has to do things on his own time, because as soon as he’s pushed, he bolts. Tim doesn’t like to give straight answers. He lies all the time, even when he’s not actually speaking falsehoods.

Oh, Tim. Why so neurotic?

Can't wait for part two!

[animegoil]

I had a lot of fun torturing Timmy with this fic, not gonna lie. Though I did torture myself with it because, guuuuuh, I got stuck a million times and flow and I felt it got repetitive (you'll see with next chapter) skfhaskda I was like, where am I going with this, I'm only writing this cause I want a neurotic freaked-out Tim and for Dick to take care of him! I'm so shallow! LOLOL.

Thank you love ♥ please comment if you see any OOCness, btws, because this is my Tim/Dick cherry here.

[the_protagonist]

Torturing Tim is always a good time. :)

[airawyn]

This is marvelous! Wonderfully written, totally IC and great attention to detail. I look forward to the next part.

[animegoil]

:D :D :D *phew* Thanks!

And the flow? lol, I was hitting my head on a wall with whether this was flowing well or not >.< It felt... convoluted when I was writing it.

[airawyn]

I think it flows really well.

[miki_moo]

Lovely! The little descriptive character moments are perfect!