fic: The Perfect You [04/?]

[animegirl29]

Title: The Perfect You [4/?]
Fandom: Super Junior
Disclaimer: This is purely fictional, as if this would really happen to them!
Rating: R/NC-17
Genre: Angst/Romance/Drama/AU
Pairings: KangTeuk, KyuMin, YeWook, SiHanChul, EunHae
Summary: After escaping his grandfather’s clutches, Leeteuk, along with his cousins, arrives in Seoul in seek of refuge. Just

Comments

[littleryu_chan]

*cries* poor Teukie!!!
He's gonna get sold~~~ T_T
When is the pain going to end? :(

[animegirl29]

NEVERRR!! Naw jokes, the pain will end at one point =]

[ja_ka_sa]

Bummieeeee noooooo...and Umma Teukie helping him.

Noo no nooooo kidnapping and selling Teukie like that.

Great fic, let more appear hehehe.
^_~.

[animegirl29]

Thank you!! ^^ Kyuhyun and Yesung will soon appear! xD

[ja_ka_sa]

You made my day...I'm gonna be soo happy all day,and waiting for Yesung to appear and also Kyuhyun.

YEsung Yesung whoahhhh

[animegirl29]

yehSEX! lawlzzz xD

[raknakondee]

did i guess right? or was it KH?
what a chpt full of drama!
awesome, but poor teukie
if i can, i'll.... those pathetic guys that kidnapped him ha!

[animegirl29]

Mebbe...mebbe..yes you did lawlz..mebbe~ :P Without the evil bad dudes though, LT and KI would never meet and then there would be NO SMUT!! *gasp* :O *all hail da smuuut~*

[raknakondee]

omg!!!!!!!!!!!
im right
but you're right too! imagine they never meet.... :o

[kyustar]

OMGSH!!! POOR EETEUK!!!!
and stupid person who was about to
violate poor kibummie! wahhh!
i love your story!
and the ending scene reminded me
of this one anime i watched one time.
okane no ... something i dunno,
but i remember it :P
then i realised the rating and practically
slammed the off button.

[1jet2unknown]

it's okane ga nai~ (no money)
sweet yaoi-manga... not so good anime.... and.... weird changes in character-apperiance XD (seme gets taller and taller and uke gets smaller and smaller until the uke is like... half the height of the seme? *lol*) but.... yeah... I, too, felt reminded of OGN with the okama bar and the selling scene *O*~<3

[animegirl29]

*coughs* Don't blame meee!! I was re-reading that manga when I was planning this fic...But yeah, there shouldn't be anything else that I stole borrowed from OGN ehehehehe ^_^;; Forgive me? :D

(omg yes! I noticed at one point that the heights went out of wack! o_O)

[1jet2unknown]

haha well OGN has so many cute/interesting story-parts in it.... it's hard to not let yourself get influenced by it *gg*
you're so~ forgiven *giggle*

(it's so WEIRD 0_0;; ayase looks like 10 soon *lol* and he's 18 or something, right? ...weird weird weird.... but i still like the artstyle and the story SO MUCH~)

[animegirl29]

I'm starting to feel a bit bad about making Donghae all depressed yet not about abusing teukie? o_O

Thanks! :D