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[Fanfic Paper Doll]

Aug 18, 2006 02:13

Title: Paper Doll
Author: Krystal_Ice
Rating: PG-13 just to be safe
Word Count: 2,069
Pairing: Kurogane/Fai
Notes: My computer went dead for a week. This also in Kurogane's point of view =o
Warnings: None at all
Prompt: Kurogane, Fai and a voodoo doll just for you Paper_fox

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Comments 3

yuzora August 18 2006, 08:04:07 UTC

You did a decent job with the Vodun doll. I'm from New Orleans and you really did a pretty good job at finding information about the dolls. Originally, Voodoo was called Vodun and still is in certain places.

The story was good too. Felt a little awkward in spots but all in all, I enjoyed it. It was a nice read. ^_-

paper_fox August 20 2006, 00:34:51 UTC

Gah! Sorry about making you do research on this subject. I honestly don't know much about voodoo dolls either; I just thought a voodoo doll in Fai's hands would probably wreck havoc and it would be fun to write.

The characters are fine. Fai's silliness getting offset by Kurogane's gruffiness, and their awkward and rather uncomfortable relationship is played off well here. I hope you enjoyed writing it!

krystal_ice August 26 2006, 01:35:06 UTC

Ah I meant to write this sooner, but thanks! ^^
It was no problem having to research it, I was just worried that maybe you did know about voodoo dolls and then I would look silly if I made stuff up XD
But I have to admit I found some pretty interesting stuff, So I had fun. Afterall, even if I might suck at it, I love to write stories XD;

Now I have to patiently await my story o_o;