Please, forgive me - Chapter 2

Mar 18, 2008 23:40

 
Title: Please, forgive me
Length: 2/?
Author: Anim22
Rating: PG-15 (Pg - R)
Genre: Drama, angst, AU-possible m-preg
Pairing: Jae/Yunho,Jae/Siwon
Summary: Jaejoong had the perfect life, and one day everything was destroyed.
A/N: I want to thank everyone that commented on my first post. Now I have more confidence to continue writing the story. I want to ( Read more... )

please forgive me

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chloe1910 March 19 2008, 08:25:06 UTC
ah..A girl spoke to Jae..I guess she must have told Jae that either:
a) Yunho is dating her/someone else
b) Yunho had sex with her or something in that line

I guess (b) cause er, Yunho sounded so sexually frustrated here...that I guess ahem he might give in to temptation?? But I can see that Yunho is totally in love with Jaejoong here and vice-versa.

I dunno why but I shudder when Jae said he's gonna give Yunho a wedding to remember...I have a bad feeling about this. I hope he doesn't do anything stupid??? At least he should comfirm whatever suspicion he has with Yunho first. But I'm gonna whack Yunho if he hurts Jae.

I still wanna see my Yunjae baby to come to this world!!!I want Jae pregnant with Yunjae baby!!!!As you can see...I'm a Yunjae shipper. Siwon is gorgeous and very nice but my heart belongs to Yunjae...Sorry Siwonnie...

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himeno15 March 19 2008, 11:15:27 UTC
wow u hav a nice analysis of the situation there. I pretty much understand why Jae was sad and ur theory makes so much sense. But if Yunho did that, he's not worthy of jaejoong's love. Baby Yunjae will be cute but baby Jaewon will be just as gorgeous. hahah sorry biased mode. *_*

Sorry to interfere into ur conversation

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anim22 March 19 2008, 17:03:55 UTC
I have never read a story with a Jaewon baby.

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chloe1910 March 20 2008, 12:59:31 UTC
haha...interfere away!! I'll always welcome you...

yes..I can see that youare Jaewon biased..but simultaneously, I'm Yunjae biased lol!!

Let us cheer for our respective choice ne???

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anim22 March 19 2008, 17:04:12 UTC
Added^^.

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moon0319 March 19 2008, 11:16:45 UTC
wuahh.. I feel something bad is coming soon.. Hopefully, Jae will forgive Yunho..

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anim22 March 19 2008, 17:22:15 UTC
Well, yes something bad is coming and Jae is out for revenge.

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jaeholife March 19 2008, 16:22:16 UTC
jealouly every where...hehe
love it
thanks

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anim22 March 19 2008, 17:22:34 UTC
Thanks for reading.

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heartoffire03 March 19 2008, 19:09:18 UTC
aha! the plot really is thickening...
i cant wait for the next chapter! :D

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anim22 March 20 2008, 03:03:20 UTC
The next chapter is going to be more intense, and I hope that you can help me again^^.

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heartoffire03 March 20 2008, 03:18:32 UTC
surely! just send it in :D
i get to read it first! *punches air* OH YEAAAH~ xDD~

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