Round Two | Fan Fiction | Entry #3

[blue_rampion]

Round: Two
Category: Fan Fiction
Title: Butterfly
Author: o0tyarah0o
Rating: G
Summary: Morphing is never beautiful, even for Cassie. Except when it is.
Warnings: Spoilers for #54.

Comments

[natural_blue_26]

I love your take on the prompt- very well done. Also like the perspective that just because Cassie is good with animals doesn't automatically mean she's completely gung-ho Mother Nature about small children-- not something you see in fandom much. :)

Favorite lines are:

- It wasn’t a perfect kiss- far from it; her mouth like an open wound bleeding into his, Ronnie’s feeling more like a leech that was sucking her dry. But it was all they had and all they ever would, so they clung to it like life itself. *tears*

- She hadn’t been able to call it Rachel, like Ronnie had suggested. It just seemed wrong. Rachel was dead. This… this thing could never replace her.

She swallowed, suddenly caught between laughter and tears. She’d been crying so much lately, it was a wonder she had any left. Again, any daughter of Cassie's in fanfiction is often named Rachel- I like how and why this is different. Nice touch to tie in Rachel's mother's name, though.

- Heh, she smirked. Ronnie, I just compared you to potty training. LOL TAKE THAT DEADBEAT

[missing_nin15]

Aw, I love your interpretation of the prompt.

[ext_391670]

Nice work, some of the short ones (with Rachel, Erek, and Toby) were really clever.