Comments | angua9: New Vibration

angua9

New Vibration

Dec 06, 2005 17:33

House fanfiction. Missing scenes from "Hunting." Chase/Cameron, mentions of House/Cameron. NC-17 (Part 1 is R).

Link to Part 1

( Part 2 )

fanfic, smut, house

Comments 14

violaswamp January 4 2006, 17:13:53 UTC

Hee. I like. One of my favorite Cameron moments is when she shows up to work after the sex with Chase and is all "Why do you have a RAT?" She says it in such a bitchy, petulant tone of voice that makes it very funny.

angua9 January 6 2006, 05:54:10 UTC

Thank you so much! Yeah, I love the way she does that line.

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angua9 January 8 2006, 18:43:54 UTC

Thank you!

sheikah January 8 2006, 07:09:32 UTC

Lovely. So well written. Chase/Cameron is my secret pairing love and you've done it beautifully. I love your descriptions of nonverbal signals at the end. Chase would totally see it as a favor.

angua9 January 8 2006, 18:47:23 UTC

Thank you so much! I love Chase/Cameron too, though I think they're very far from being a couple. I tried to show that Cameron has no clue what's going on with Chase.

sandrine January 8 2006, 11:31:10 UTC

That was brilliant. Extremely well-written and so very clever! I loved the dual POVs and, above all, the last bit about the silent conversation everyone read in a different way.

angua9 January 8 2006, 18:47:59 UTC

Thank you so much -- for reading, and for your kind words!

vitawash24 January 8 2006, 21:43:45 UTC

Love this! You do exactly what a missing scene should do - fill in the gaps so what the writers did makes sense. ;) Cameron's actions actually make more sense to me now...and Chase's, too. Plus there's this whole theme of miscommunication that ties in nicely to the show. Great piece.

angua9 January 10 2006, 03:38:42 UTC

Thank you! Those were my exact intentions! :)