[Enjoyed this! I like how you had him focus on sensory perceptions and colors -- very interesting how he seems to be totally focused on that. Also like this idea of color crumbling, and how the sea melts into the sky.]
Oh wow, I really wasn't expecting anyone to comment OOCly, so thank you for that! About the dream -- I wasn't really sure what to write, so I went with the hint of his memories about the virtual "paradise" he was in before, and the black sun... well, would represent the real world. You should play the game, if you haven't already :D
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Leader! Do you know what dat was 'bout?
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It is called a dream.
[He says this with some certainty, although he's sure he's never had a dream before.]
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[Hee, but he smiles widely, it wasn't a bad "dream", except for the little creepy bit at the end.]
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... Tch. At least yours looked familiar. Hell if I know where I've seen any of it before.
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...You remember it too?
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