Almost Too Late-PG

[angryzen]

It had briefly occurred to her that his body was too limp when he finally fell. She tried to crush the panic threatening to rise as she drew the circle on her floorboard. She could not go to him just yet. He had kept the demon busy long enough for her to catch her breath and push past her bruises, her cuts, and the pain in order to get up and start

Comments

[skysamuelle]

wow, you just killed me with this one. Right now i'm a blubbering mess of Bamon goo. I can't get my mind off how awesome Damon's reaction to Bonnie's ILY was.

"Damon’s breathing was shallow as he listened to the words he was beginning to accept he would never hear. He had begun to accept that she truly did not have it in her to love him."

I can picture that so clearly,m because with Damon's romantic history, it would be natural that he would think like that.

[angryzen]

I'm glad I turned you into a blubbering mess! Lol.

I think one way Bamon's relationship could go is that Bonnie would deny Damon's feelings for so long/so vehemently that it would start to appear to Damon that she wasn't playing hard to get. She just cannot have romantic feelings for him.

[cryngle]

Aw that was a great line and one that would sit heavily with Damon. I suppose his grown to accepting the rejection but the way you wrote it was heartbreaking. I really felt sorry for him in that moment. He needs major huggage!

[fiestyxgirlx18]

Wow, You just blow me away with how you just write Bamon mess perfectly! I cant get over how Damon reacts to Bonnie's ILY! It just so natural!

[angryzen]

Thank you for reading!

[terrible_lina]

Oh my Gosh! That was perfect. I could see it all in my head. The part where Bonnie was thinking about all the times she rejected Damon was SO intense. God, I loved it. :)

[angryzen]

Thank you so much. I'm happy you loved it. I'm so glad the emotion translated.

[1beaut]

Gah, I love you! Alta, beautiful and excellent job of painting a clear picture of what a bamon relationship will be like. It won't be a easy road, it'll be touch and challenging but still a strong one. I love everything in this, it's so real! It's got the passion, the sadness, the love. It makes me mad that its not on our screens now, but bamon will be worth my patience, so I'll continue waiting and continue reading more awesome bamon fics from you. Great work Alta!
xoxo
-Monique

[angryzen]

Monique, thank you so much! I'm so happy you loved it. I stopped quit working on this for days after Damon told Elena he loved her, because I wasn't sure I could do it justice if I continued it. I needed a break. Lol. I'm glad it still turned out well! I'm mad this isn't playing on our screens too, but I have a feeling we'll have to indulge ourselves in fanfic for a long while.

[1beaut]

[q][b]stopped quit working on this for days after Damon told Elena he loved her, because I wasn't sure I could do it justice if I continued it.[/q][/b]

Yeah I laughed at that when I read it. Such a slap in the face, I can understand the writing break after that haha. You never need to doubt yourself though because this is way more amazing and sweet than what they did on the show. I missed when he said it so when they talked about fanforum I was like, 'Oh well I'm glad I missed it then'. haha. I'm fine though because Antonella said something that made a lot of sense. Anyways, lovely drabble, keep it up! :D

[angryzen]

Lol. Thank you very much!

[sana4eva]

*speechless, weeping* You've done it again, sweet lass. (((huggles)) Loved Damons response to her confession, and what that meant for both of them. The way Bonnie always defends those she loves against evil, and more so, the way Damon defended her. *smishes, joyful*

[angryzen]

*Holds you while you weep* Thanks for reading!