Comments | angryzen: The Unseen Series-Car Ride(PG-13)

angryzen

The Unseen Series-Car Ride(PG-13)

Oct 23, 2010 21:11

Bonnie glanced behind her to the back of the truck where Mason lay. She righted herself with a quick look to Damon who was driving like there wasn’t an unconscious body in the truck. An unconscious body she had helped capture. She knew that when Stefan figured out that it was Katherine she had seen with Mason that he would get with Damon and figure ( Read more... )

bamon, damon, the vampire diaries, fic, the unseen series, bonnie

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eternity_fate October 23 2010, 20:08:41 UTC

DnB are just so great. Their banter is amazing, I love seeing into both of their thoughts into the story. Thanks for working on it because ever since Thursday I have been wanting a fic like this.

angryzen October 23 2010, 20:10:49 UTC

No problem. Thank you for reading!

eternity_fate October 23 2010, 20:33:25 UTC

I'm going to re-read it later because I was doing way too many stuff at the time I was reading the story! Lol

angryzen October 23 2010, 20:45:08 UTC

Lol.

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jennifer488 October 23 2010, 20:27:17 UTC

Alta, you did such an amazing job!!! I hope you write more soon :)

angryzen October 23 2010, 20:31:42 UTC

Thanks, Jen!

jennifer488 October 23 2010, 20:42:58 UTC

You're very welcome :)

ladygawain October 23 2010, 20:41:37 UTC

I loved it!!! Especially the opening sequence, I'm looking forward to seeing your version of Offscreenville, I think these two yield some awesome potential for that :)

Thanks for sharing.

angryzen October 23 2010, 20:47:34 UTC

Thanks, Mags! I'm happy you liked it.

dannyblue October 23 2010, 21:32:05 UTC

Watching them drive off together in that scene, you can't help wondering what that trip is going to be like. You could imagine they didn't talk at all. But Damon not talking? I don't see it. :D

Anyway, I love your take on what happened during The Car Ride. (Such an event must be capitalized.) I think I'll go read it again. :)

angryzen October 23 2010, 21:38:37 UTC

Lmao.

Yes, you can imagine them not talking. But yeah, Damon so wouldn't stay quiet. Besides from the way they started talking at the boarding house, you got the sense that it was definitely not quiet in that truck. Lol.

signalfire915 October 26 2010, 05:35:54 UTC

yeah i agree. they was too much snarky banter going on at the boardinghouse for me not to think that they were definitely not quiet during the ride over

sana4eva October 23 2010, 21:48:46 UTC

Brilliantly written, sweet Alta. Wondered what that car ride was gonna be like - hehe - small space with two forceful natures and it's gonna get heated. ;) In more ways than one! :D

Thanks for addressing her part in Masons capture.. that wouldn't of sat well with her. LOVE the sexy too. ;) Can't forget the important bit. (heh.. do we ever?) MUAH!

angryzen October 23 2010, 21:51:42 UTC

Lol. No we don't! Glad you enjoyed it!