Everything

Jun 03, 2010 21:07

Title Everything
Summary For John it's over. But Randy don't want to live without him.
Rating T
Disclaimers Not mine, not at all.

This is a ending to Soundtrack of my broken heart from Read more... )

centon, fanfic

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nomprenom June 4 2010, 00:38:38 UTC
Oh, how I wish every Candy fic ended like this one *dreams*
Lol, I can't help it. I just can't stand that combination.

I liked this a lot, I love when they pour their hearts on eachother and all the lovey-dovey words like "You're my everything and No one else <3333, but I did't fully get the ending (Excuse my dumb brain for a second). White roses? Cody's room? Everlasting/Eternal love? To Cody? From... Randy? Enlighten me, please. lol.

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angrbooa June 4 2010, 05:25:33 UTC
Me too, oh, me too.

John send the roses to Cody to show his Everlasting/Eternal love? to Randy (and vice versa). I wanted the story to accommodate to the other roses-stories from ... )

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angrbooa June 5 2010, 01:39:27 UTC
I totally agree. At all points.

Thank you! Glad you liked it!

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bugz_aroc June 4 2010, 12:06:19 UTC
*squeals* You did it and Trust me I love this!!!

You write a conflicted Randy so damn well. Him finally coming to his senses and realizing whats really important even though it 'might' be too late.

"It's over. I ended it. I punched him in the face for the message he sent to you. He isn't allowed to hurt you. Nobody is."
"Except you, you mean?"
Randy swallowed hard and wondered what happened to them. They were so happy in the beginning. He screwed it up. He alone.

Talk about a slap to the face, lol.

Just heartbreaking reading Randy explain his feelings cause there's a side of you that's rooting for him but there's also a side that wants John to punch 'him' in the face.

And it better not be a lie, because I will crush every bone in your goddamn body if you lie to me ever again. That's a promise."

Dangerous Johnny, XD.

Love that you didn't place them back into a relationship. Oh yeah, Randy better be the best damn friend ever!

And I love the ending. It's like 'Ha, Cody' look at us!

Love, Love this! <33

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angrbooa June 5 2010, 01:44:04 UTC
I'm really glad (and relieved) that you liked it.

Randy gave me trouble in this one. I enjoy writing him and his mind, but this was difficult, cause he rarely talks about his true emotions and I didn't wanted to portray him as a softie...still think I failed, lol.
But that's what true love makes you...soft. Haha.

I just had to...punish Cody a little bit >D

Dangerous Johnny is dangerous. And he has every right to be :]

Yeah, I thought a "Oh, Randy, so glad you came back. *KISS*" was just VERY unrealistic, and I was too upset with Randy to give him that xD He has to earn it.

Exactly. :)

Thank you for reading and oh, so glad you liked it <33

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annemarie_blfan June 7 2010, 14:25:37 UTC
Great story, but unsatisfying...NO hot kinky sex!? ...I'm kinda disappointed...
But I likes the fact tah Randy hit Cody...and his rambling at the end...so sweet!
If I where in John-John's place I would take him back in an instant!

*nibbles at your neck to make ya a hickey*
Thanks for posting...all I need now is some hot sex...and you don't have to write it down...*purrs*

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angrbooa June 7 2010, 17:13:13 UTC
I know... :(
So sorry.

I seriously don't know what keeps me from writing the hot sex. YOU know I can do it... Somehow I really have to force me when it comes to fic. Don't know why.
But the next fic will be purely sex. Promise.

Aww, bb, not here *looks around shyly*

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annemarie_blfan June 7 2010, 17:40:09 UTC
Then I'm looking forward to your sex sto...*cough*.. I mean next story!

Okay...*pecks*...we meet later at our special place, where nobody can watch us...*purrs*

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angrbooa June 7 2010, 19:06:03 UTC
*purrs back* Oh baby, I'll show you how much I love you...

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christinalp December 25 2010, 00:45:02 UTC
loved!!!
such a better ending than the original!
thank u for writing it!

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