{70}Some SagaxShou / Reituki Drabbles

Jul 10, 2008 18:33

Title: 10 drabbles
Author: Angie (angie_valo )
Pairing: SagaxShou / ReitaxRuki
Raiting: PG-13
Genre: Drabbled
Summary: 5 SagaxShou and 5 Reituki drabbles
Disclaimer: I don't own them -.-
Beta-ed by philthebob

The 10 Songs Meme
1. Pick a character, pairing, or fandom you like.
2. Turn on your music player and put it on random/shuffle.
3. Write a drabble related to each song that ( Read more... )

fanfic, drabble, sagaxshou, reituki

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philthebob July 10 2008, 23:20:14 UTC
ah these were realy nice. even the sad ones. i really like 2,4 and 5 for some reason ^^

erm i did spot a grammar fail or two, and you said point them out so erm

in 1. did you mean 'that he didn't hear someone calling him' or 'that he hadn't heard someone calling him' instead of 'that he didn't heard someone calling him'?

in 3. did you mean 'where was he?' instead of 'where was him?'?

and a couple more mistakes, some probably typos.

sorry i am probably pointing these out in bad way it's just since you asked i thought you would like to know some ^^' if you want i can go over this and say all the things i saw in a message or email or something? maybe be your beta if you are lookign for one?

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angie_valo July 11 2008, 07:45:51 UTC
glad that you liked them
and thanks for pointing me out the mistake =D
i would correct them right now
and i really don't mind people telling me about grammar mistakes, since i'm still learning english.
it would be really nice if you do that <3, you could tell me about the others mistakes by a message

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philthebob July 11 2008, 10:51:01 UTC
well your english is still really good hun ^^

honestly trust me i know american and english people who can't write with good gramar to save their life. or spell for that matter.

sure i'll message you with other things i noticed ^^

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angie_valo July 13 2008, 06:29:49 UTC
thanks for the correction <3
i had already seen both messages, and i would post the story with all the corrections later

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angie_valo July 11 2008, 07:46:38 UTC
hehe, i also liked the sad one XP
thanks <3

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jelliepish July 11 2008, 04:06:32 UTC
Love #1 and #8 ^___^

Very nice~~~~~ >3

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angie_valo July 11 2008, 07:52:31 UTC
glad that you enjoy them >3

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akemi_gazerock July 11 2008, 14:30:44 UTC
I loved all of them ^_^
ReitaxRuki and SagaxShou are my OTPs..
so I really liked to read this meme,
can't choose one.. all of them are beautiful =3

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angie_valo July 11 2008, 22:28:57 UTC
glad that you liked them <3
those are also my OTP'S xD
hehe, should i take your indecision as something good XD

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patdislove July 11 2008, 20:10:14 UTC
I am really impressed that you are still learning English :D

Trust me, people can barely speak and write English over here correctly in America because we fail at life xD

I really liked these. You are a really good writer :-] I really enjoyed 2 and 10!

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angie_valo July 11 2008, 22:31:15 UTC
XD really XD i have been learning English since i was 8 years old, and now i'm 16 almost 17, and yet i continue studying english <3
XD i also have some grammar fail on spanish (my first language) XD but it is because spanish has more grammar and it is more difficult in some sense, than the english
thank you again <33

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