Musical Memories - 2/??

[angelzli]

Title: Musical Memories (lame i know, but at least its something)
Chapters: 2/??
Author:angelzli
Pairing: Reita x Ruki, possibly more later?
Rating: PG-13?  idk, read warnings
Warning: mentions of murder, mentions of rape
Genre: drama, maybe others...
Disclaimer: sadly, i dont own them, only the story and the OC are mine
Summary: Reita started leading a life down

Comments

[angelzli]

aww! ty! yay cookies! *takes cookies*
yes, and at that age, poor Ruki!
ty for commenting, it means much! ~<3

[chibi_ruki]

I liked this chapter *O* Ruki hummed! I was shocked that he'd responded in some way xD

and I don't think you suck at dialogue. I think it's kinda hard to write a lot of dialogue when the other main character doesn't speak at all xDD you're doing fine ^^;;

now we found out what happened to Ruki! I was praying that he wasn't the one that got raped x.x I mean it's equally bad that his sister and mother were possibly raped in front of his eyes, but still D:

[angelzli]

equally bad yes, a shame he possibly witnessed the whole ordeal -_-' in Ruki's state, any response is good.

ty for the encouragement! its what i needed right now xD the dialog is hard yes, but i'll get used to it xD

im having enough trouble just with the lj cut here lol i still dont get it lol ill try working harder on it xD

~<3

[murky_murk]

it's become more interesting ^-^ and you don't suck at dialogue, they actually were good ^-^
so keep writing! at least now Reita know a little what happened to Ruki, so he probably would understand him a bit better now ^^'

[angelzli]

ur too sweet xD ty so much! xD i'll keep writing and will update as soon as i can =p ~<3

[a_cupcha]

Waa, another great story! I so luvd this n u're too great for beginning.

[a_cupcha]

Oh, n i wanna friend u, hope u dont mind. ^^;

[angelzli]

awww! i would luv that ^_^ im still new around here and learning everything, so if u dont mind that part i think it would be awesome ~<3

[a_cupcha]

thankies~

[angelzli]

ty!!! im trying to work hard on chap 3 hehe its harder then i thought it would be plus i had lots to do over the last several weeks! lol ill post it as soon as i can. thankies!! ^_^

~<3