Comments | angelshill: me again, here again... :)

angelshill

me again, here again... :)

Sep 20, 2010 01:18

okay, i realized something while doing this chapter... it's absolutely a bad idea to choose a similar location for two different pairs in one same fic... i had a hard time figuring out how to make this different from the JunxMao beach scene in chapter 8.5...

i guess i should have made 8.5 a trip to Disneyland... but... but... i really, really ( Read more... )

@baby steps, **multi-chaptered, fanfic

Comments 11

tenshii_chan September 19 2010, 17:57:07 UTC

wahahah.. this one touched my heart.. it was such a good chapter that i nearly cried during pi and maki's scene.. thanks for this.. i waited for this, and it was such a pleasant surprise seeing this in my update's list..
thanks as always..

will wait for the next one..

pS. i always love how the guys end up meeting at Jun's place. heheh

angelshill September 20 2010, 01:35:38 UTC

thanks... :)

i'm glad you liked it... :)

i kinda enjoy writing those scenes so... yeah! lol! :)

ruing September 20 2010, 11:22:02 UTC

This is love love love infinite times!
Pi and Maki's scene by the beach was perfect!
oh and it's so sweet that he brought her over to their old house.

Someday they're going to have a family too! ahahaha!
And Pi allowing Maki to lie down on his lap shows he is getting more and more comfortable with her and vice versa!
wonder what gender their baby will be.. hmmm...
a baby Yamaki would be so cute. one with Papa Pi's nose and lips and the eyes would be Mama Maki's!
Ok I'm imagining too much XD
and yes the kiss is major major epic win! <3

Haha! love it when the guys crash in Jun's place! but when Mao comes they better be ready to find another place!
Beautiful update! thank you!

angelshill September 20 2010, 12:13:13 UTC

oh... thanks! :)

i'm glad you liked it...
i'm still deciding on what the gender the baby's going to have though... :)

and yeah, the guys knew that their days at Matsujun's place is numbered so they're making the best out of it... :D

thanks... :)

azraqey September 20 2010, 13:49:36 UTC

hoho~~~~
speechless^^

angelshill September 20 2010, 15:53:53 UTC

hi there...

hope you liked it... thanks! :)

ruilian_thatsme September 22 2010, 14:42:43 UTC

Ei! i love this too! especially with how Pi and Maki spent and ended their short holiday... i liked how the J guys talked about things, it felt rather realistic...

angelshill September 23 2010, 00:34:51 UTC

thanks... i'm glad you liked it... :)

pocariporii September 22 2010, 22:06:38 UTC

I was planning to comment after I read all the new updates but wahh...too sweet not to comment! I love the beach scene with Yamaki <3 So perfect and peaceful! I love how Yamapi wonders if he will be a good father and husband to the baby and Maki...awww...I think if he ever has a baby, he will be a great father. He's so gentle!

Yay! They finally kissed again. Yamapi is so romantic in the story, reading this makes me swoon a little...haha!

pocariporii September 22 2010, 22:09:54 UTC

Oops...I thought your other update was the end of this story...haha...I need to read more carefully! I was getting a little sad that it was ending =(

angelshill September 23 2010, 00:39:34 UTC

oh... :) nope, i think baby steps has at least 2 or 3 more chapters... i'm just having a hard time figuring out how to write the "transition" period.... but it is coming to an end... :)

i find most of the JE boys romantic... i guess it's in the training... lol! but yeah, i guess he'd be a good father... and i'm now looking forward to the next JE boy announcing his marriage for real... :)

thanks! :)