Two Merlin comment fics

[angelqueen04]

Wrote these both over at ontd_merlin's recent comment fic posting.

Title: Take My Hand
Author: angelqueen04
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairing: gen, Morgana and Mordred
Warnings: mentions of character death
Spoilers: Up through The Coming of Arthur, Part Two
Word Count: 424 words
Summary: Morgana kept walking.
Disclaimer: Merlin is the property of the BBC. I make no claim

Comments

[archaeologist_d]

Those were great. Loved how much she hated everyone in the first one and Mordred was there to guide her. Loved it.

The second one was more sad than anything. I felt really bad for Leon. He seems to have loved her in his own way but I liked the way you've done the backstory with them.

[angelqueen04]

Thank you!

I really tried to capture Morgana's state of mind from her last moments in the finale, and take them a step further if the worst should happen and Morgause doesn't survive her injuries (though I, for one, hope like crazy that she does -- she's such a cool villain that it would be a shame to lose her). And of course, Mordred is tons of fun to write. :D

The second is sad! I was kind of surprised that it turned out so, because I didn't start writing it with the intention of it being full of angst. It wasn't even supposed to be almost 2,000 words! I was initially going to just have it be brief, perhaps the courtyard scene from Leon's perspective, but when I opened the door, all of this flooded in! Wouldn't take no for an answer. ;)

Thanks again!

[ophelia_winters]

This was steller. Made me sad, seeing Morgana go from being the woman he adored to..what we saw at the end of this series. Lovely work. Leon was fantastic! <3

[angelqueen04]

Thanks!