Finally finished the next two.
For
havocthecat, who requested Elizabeth Weir and Morgan le Fey: "And by descent from Royall lynage came/Of ancient Kings and Queenes," --The Faerie Queen by Edmund Spenser
Note: Havoc, I did my best to keep this to what you wanted, but I'm afraid something of my bitterness toward the Ancients snuck in there. I really stuck it
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But you like? Sweet! :)
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My feeling about Chaya is that she was more attracted to John for the novelty of someone not from Proculus anyway. (I kind of liked writing her with John thinking she was crushing on him while she crushed on Lizzie instead, I have to admit.)
Merlin! I have much love for Merlin. It'd be awesome to write the story of Moros and Ganos Lal. I love Oma to death, even though I think she made major mistakes, plus Orlin too. And Ayiana, even though she never Ascended. (I don't care what canon says; I bet there's a way to Ascend without going all glowy. Canon's a whole mass of contradictions anyway.)
Really, I love your description of Elizabeth's death, and the thoughts she was having, plus Ganos Lal's explanations. You made Ganos Lal a real person, not just an unknowable Ancient. Which I adore.
I could glee more over this fic, but it would be difficult. :)
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I'm glad you liked my interpretation of Ganos Lal. I look back at it and I already see some little things that I'd change, but overall, I do like her character as I wrote it. She and Moros do need some time together. Heck, the two of them should totally pwn the Others. :D The rest of them are all right, though these two are certainly my favorites.
As for Elizabeth's death, I was rather partial to having her go out in a blaze of glory sticking it to the Replicators. Because she totally would if she could manage it. ;)
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