Comments | angelofsith: Fiction post

angelofsith

Jun 04, 2007 00:32

I've updated this fiction post. Chapter 3 is still WIP, but some feedback would be nice.

Comments 4

rosethornn June 4 2007, 01:01:00 UTC

That's amazing. ^.^

I wish I could write as well as you do. :) I look forward to the rest.

angelofsith June 4 2007, 02:05:57 UTC

Thank you. :)

Would you buy it if I published it?

rosethornn June 4 2007, 02:38:34 UTC

hm.. not sure. On the one hand, it's well written.. but I think your style still needs some time to fully emerge.

angelofsith June 4 2007, 03:00:58 UTC

I'll definitely be rewriting it before I publish it, I went through it the other day and noticed a load of errors in it.