Comments | angelofprey: Bump in the Night Ficathon: Barely There (2/2) (10/Rose)

angelofprey

Bump in the Night Ficathon: Barely There (2/2) (10/Rose)

Jul 30, 2010 13:15

Title: Barely There
Characters/Pairing: Doctor, Rose, Ten/Rose
Rating: T (for adultish-undertones)
Prompt: never_ever_will prompt 14, and fication: Bump in the Night
Beta: None, sorry but I proof read it about seven times...
Disclaimer: I do not own Doctor Who or the BBC, they own me.
Summary: A trip to Stonehenge goes horribly wrong when Rose doesn't wake up.
( Read more... )

doctor who, ten/rose, rose, doctor, hearts and minds, doctor/rose, ten, fanfiction

Comments 13

milieva July 30 2010, 17:39:04 UTC

This is lovely. And I can see how the shipper in you would be interested in continuing.

This was fantastic. Thank you very much for sharing.

angelofprey July 30 2010, 22:44:22 UTC

*blushes* Thank you very much for reading and for all of your kind words. I very much appreciate the support.

siriuslyblack95 July 30 2010, 20:09:26 UTC

This was brilliant :)
I wasn't sure what too expect when I began to read the first part but i am very pleased with this ending.
well done.

angelofprey July 30 2010, 22:47:01 UTC

I'm glad to hear that it is liked. After I saw all the responses I got yesterday I started to get nervous about the ending. Even reading it now I catch a few rather large errors I've made. Erk.

Anyway, I'm very glad that you enjoyed this story. Thank you so much for the support!

juliet316 July 30 2010, 23:22:24 UTC

Lovely ending, but hopefully the Doctor does tell her someday (either in the form of 10.5 or in a lovely au where Doomsday never happened.).

angelofprey July 31 2010, 00:37:24 UTC

I can see it happening in either of those senarios, yes.

Thanks for reading!

emraldeyedauter August 4 2010, 06:00:28 UTC

This had a lovely balance in it. Great storytelling and even though the rest of us fangirls would loved to have them both remember the kiss or do it afterwards I like how you've done it.

Great incorporating of the documentary as well. Stonehenge is so fascinating there is plenty of history and myth that makes for good fiction.

angelofprey August 12 2010, 17:08:36 UTC

I am very happy that you enjoyed it. If I'm completely honest I really wanted to end it that way too, but it just didn't seem right for this particular fic. Maybe I'll write a sequel... maybe. I've got lots of other projects I'm working on right now sooo...maybe.

I love Stonehenge and using it as a setting/plot device is so much fun.

maniacalshen August 9 2010, 01:49:13 UTC

Nice. I could see these two getting into and out of a mess like this. :)

angelofprey August 12 2010, 17:10:12 UTC

I take that as a very big compliment! One thing I strive for is for my writing to seem true to the cannon.