A trio of drabbles done for challenge #3 at
demigod_elite . They can be read individually or together in sequence.
Drabble: In which Odysseus is not the hero. Pg. 423 words. Calypso/Odysseus, unrequited. Hermes.
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When asked, what wouldst thou? She replieth: I would die. )
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Very interesting, my dear. You have a writing style that goes more with with characters traditional roots than with Percy, which is fitting, since calypso is the focus.
I think you've provided an interesting view of the three men and you've also shown us a weary, almost bitter side to Calypso. You also let us see why she might be that way. Good job.
Your icon is beautiful, by the way.
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My writing style is kind of archaic - it's hard to get out of actually, which makes any attempt on humour hard, and I end up writing very angsty stuff. Sometimes I feel like the angst is really too much (cringe at the last line of drabble #1). I really can't help it... However, I'm glad you think it's fitting here.
Thank you! I skimmed through the Odyssey again, focusing on Calypso, and felt that Riordan softened her character in PJO to an extent. I wanted to see if I can explore what might have happened to make her who she is in PJO, what her state of mind might have been like etc.
Icon credit must go to bellalikespie. I think it's really pretty too. :)
Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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