WC - Out of Town

[angelita26]

Title: Out of Town

Comments

[kanarek13]

I am always in awe how lightning fast it goes from one sentence to an entire fic \o/

And this turned out brilliant :D Yay! Shameless Neal!whump of the best flavor. I think my favorite tiny bit in this is Neal realizing he has a Peter attached to one of his arms :D D'awwwwwwwww, best image ever :D Diana showing a bit of her soft side is also wonderful :D Of course, she cares :D

Hmmm, thank you ♥

[angelita26]

Sometimes I can be very speedy and sometimes it takes me a while to bring the narrative together (*eyes Neal Hughes with a sigh*)

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Neal should always have a Peter attached to one arm, don't you think? It's such an adorable mental image! And you know how much I love writing Diana with Neal - she was a lot of fun here because I wasn't really expecting her to get that soft with him, but she did. :D Thank you!!

[leesa_perrie]

Wonderful h/c fic! Love Diana's gentle side showing through at the end there, and the banter throughout - very them! Lovely!

[angelita26]

Thank you! I adore Diana and giving her a soft side every now and then. There had to be banter too - they like to snark at each other. Hee! :D

(PS Love your icon!)

[leesa_perrie]

(PS Love your icon!)

Thank you! That scene always makes me laugh - poor Peter, no one bumps his fist! :) :)

[pooh_collector]

Whooo Hooo!

Whumpage all around!

This was wonderful treat for my Monday afternoon.

Your dialogue in this was excellent. Snarky Neal is snarky.

And, our poor, poor Neal. I loves it so much when he whumped. And he whumped but good in this!

*hangs head in shame at being so happy over the whumpage*

[angelita26]

Thank you so much! I had to spread a little whumpage around - a minor car wreck is good for that :D

Don't hang your head - embrace it! I certainly have, lol *hugs* :D

[embroiderama]

This is awesome! I love the road trip bickering and the signs of Neal's lingering injury, and then the quick trip from concerning to scary was great.

[angelita26]

Thank you! All were things that I really wanted to show in this story - I'm so glad you liked them!

[dennih23]

A little whump for everybody! Love the final image with Neal in the hospital bed, Peter attached to one side and Diana on the other - hugs all of them.

[angelita26]

I did spread it around a little this time - that was fun :D That was a mental image I got that I couldn't let go of - the three of them in the hospital room - I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks!!