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WC - Unbreakable (Part 6)

Mar 14, 2013 23:55

Title: Unbreakable
Part: 6/?
Author: angelita26
Rating: PG-13
Characters and/or Pairing: Gen - Neal, Diana, Peter, Elizabeth, Jones, Mozzie
Spoilers: None.
Warnings: Unbetaed.
Word Count: ~2100
Summary: Neal's loss of appetite concerns his closest friends.

Notes: Written for a prompt at collarkink that can be found at the end of this chapter. Thank you all ( Read more... )

character: diana, character: neal, character: peter, fandom: white collar, verse: unbreakable, character: elizabeth, fic, character: mozzie, character: jones

Comments 12

embroiderama March 15 2013, 04:15:48 UTC

Awwwww, YAY, I love this! There's little I enjoy more than Neal in need of feeding, and I love the way you handled it here--especially the conversation with Peter when he was like, "Yes, I'm talking to somebody. I know."

And Diana and Christie, are they back together? :)

angelita26 March 24 2013, 19:07:54 UTC

Thank you so much! I had a lot of fun with working out who was bringing what and how they were going to try to entice Neal to eat it. Peter's was one of the most fun to write.

Diana and Christie... you'll have to wait and see ;)

lauracollared March 15 2013, 04:36:05 UTC

Awww nice chapter :)

angelita26 March 24 2013, 19:08:30 UTC

Thank you! :-D

sapphire2309 March 15 2013, 12:05:42 UTC

I made chicken noodle soup once - it does take all day. Love that Peter's best agent finally managed to get neal to eat =)

angelita26 March 24 2013, 19:09:38 UTC

I realized toward the end that El wouldn't have nearly enough time to actually make it, but I definitely wanted her to have Neal help, so I finagled a little. And I definitely wanted her to be the one to get Neal eating again. I'm glad you liked it! Thank you!

love_82 March 18 2013, 05:11:12 UTC

This was lovely! I love everyone stopping by with food and that Elizabeth finally got Neal to eat. I also love that Jones adopted a puppy. I am really big on animal adoption. :)

I had to laugh at Peter's attempt. Seriously Peter, Deviled ham? :) Altough I have never actually had it so it could be good.

Anyway I really like these little stories. You can just feel how much they all care about each other. I look forward to the next part.

angelita26 March 24 2013, 19:11:32 UTC

Thank you! I had so much fun with writing everyone in this chapter - that hadn't happened yet in the course of this little fic. I wanted Jones to have something to talk about, and a puppy sounded perfect - the puppy will pop up again!

hoosierbitch March 24 2013, 19:29:52 UTC

Aaaaw! LOVE THROUGH FOOD! My favorite trope. :-) You showcased each of the characters so well through what they tried to feed him. :-)

angelita26 March 28 2013, 14:51:33 UTC

Good, good - I wanted each food to be something that character would bring to the table. I'm so glad you liked it - I had such fun with it. Thanks!