Comments | angelita26: WC - Unbreakable (Part 1)

angelita26

WC - Unbreakable (Part 1)

Mar 08, 2013 01:31

Title: Unbreakable ( Read more... )

verse: unbreakable, character: diana, character: neal, character: peter, fic, fandom: white collar, character: jones

Comments 14

kanarek13 March 8 2013, 07:58:17 UTC

Awww, thank you for bringing this story to your LJ. Now I don't have to worry I will miss an update :D

Poor Neal and Diana, after such an ordeal it's only understandable they need each other more than ever. The need to be close to each other, the little gestures, unspoken needs, it's all so heartbreaking!

angelita26 March 8 2013, 20:04:59 UTC

Thank you! Posting anonymously is fun for a while, but it gets harder when you want to edit something. I thought it was time to post it here. I'm hoping to get the last three or four pieces done this weekend.

I really fell in love with Neal and Diana as close, close friends when I started writing this piece. They're so heartbreaking, but it's good that they have each other.

embroiderama March 8 2013, 13:22:12 UTC

Aw, I really love this! I look forward to seeing where you go with it.

angelita26 March 8 2013, 20:05:46 UTC

Thank you! I jump around in time a bit on this one, but it was a fun writing exercise for me. You'll like the next one - sick!Neal ;)

winterstar95 March 8 2013, 13:39:36 UTC

Very interesting start....would really like to see where this goes.

angelita26 March 8 2013, 20:06:58 UTC

Thanks! I have four more parts that just need to be cleaned up, and another three or four to write this weekend. Exploring Neal and Diana's relationship has been very interesting.

elrhiarhodan March 8 2013, 14:36:57 UTC

This is terrific - the description of Neal and Diana as Peter and the time find them is heartwrenching.

Can't wait for more of it.

angelita26 March 8 2013, 20:10:25 UTC

Thanks so much! Description is one of the things that I feel is a strength of mine, and it's always great to hear when someone else notices. Especially when I respect and admire your writing so much. Thank you!

theatregirl7299 March 8 2013, 17:25:07 UTC

You know I love this fic and I'm so glad you're posting it so others can love it too.

The connection that Neal and Diana have in order to get through their experience is so uplifting.

Wonderful job.

angelita26 March 8 2013, 20:12:07 UTC

I do know you love it, and I appreciate all of your help and cheerleading on this one in particular - and your talking me through the titling of this thing. *HUGS*

Neal and Diana have become a favorite friendship of mine through writing this - they're such interesting characters to throw together. Thank you!