Drabbles with Hurts and Feels

May 03, 2014 22:27

I should be studying, but this lightning bolt of inspiration hit in chat just now, and I have to post it ( Read more... )

drabble meme, writing exercise, meme

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aragarna May 4 2014, 07:43:00 UTC
Peter, relief

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angelita26 May 5 2014, 02:38:41 UTC
This is post-S5 ( ... )

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aragarna May 5 2014, 08:25:18 UTC
Awwww beautiful. Thank you!!

Also loved the one you wrote for Sholio! :-)

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angelita26 June 12 2014, 03:44:53 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I liked getting in Peter's head here and seeing Neal through his eyes for a bit.

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kanarek13 May 4 2014, 08:52:45 UTC
Of course poor Neal can't go without an owie for too long :P

Neal, terror

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angelita26 May 5 2014, 03:38:47 UTC
Neal woke with his heart hammering in his chest. Pure terror forced the adrenalin through his system, making him feel like he'd just run a five minute mile ( ... )

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elrhiarhodan May 5 2014, 15:44:09 UTC
**snuggles this ficlet**

Wants more.

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angelita26 June 12 2014, 03:50:44 UTC
I really love how this one turned out, so there could be more in the future. I started it with the idea that Neal was waking from a nightmare while in bed with Peter, and it kind of turned into this very caring, kind of gentle thing.

Thank you!

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sinfulslasher May 4 2014, 09:11:08 UTC
And now for something completely different... *g*

Satchmo - loss

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angelita26 May 5 2014, 14:52:53 UTC
You're just playing with fire here ;) I got a lot of flak at the DC meet-up because I killed Satchmo in a drabble, but I went a different direction with this one. I don't specifically use the word loss, but it's there in tone. Hope you like it ( ... )

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elrhiarhodan May 5 2014, 15:36:19 UTC
ACK!!!!!!!

No Satchmos were harmed, you say? You are breaking my heart, and Satchmo's too!

(But it's wonderful and perfect).

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angelita26 June 12 2014, 03:54:27 UTC
TBH, I kind of broke my own heart with that one, but with how S5 ended - I could just see Satchmo watching everyone leaving his life :'( *hugs Satchmo and Elr and EVERYONE*

Thank you!

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elrhiarhodan May 4 2014, 14:19:51 UTC
Peter - Grief

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angelita26 May 5 2014, 15:18:34 UTC
I had written a little bit of this before I posted the drabble meme, but it fit so well with your prompt that I had to use it. Hope you enjoy!

Peter took a deep breath and closed his eyes. He couldn't do this while looking out at all of the somber, wet-eyed familiar faces of his friends and co-workers.

"Neal Caffrey was… Neal… Well, he was a lot of things. He was a co-worker and a friend. He was kind but could be ruthless when he needed to be. He was reckless but brave. He was also a pain in my ass-" nervous chuckles rose from the group "-but he was so damn smart." Peter paused to gather his thoughts and take another breath. "He was a man who needed someone to show him the right path, and I hope I was able to do that for him. Neal, we - I - will miss you ( ... )

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elrhiarhodan May 5 2014, 15:24:40 UTC
Ahhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

I have a special love for return from the dead stories and this one presses those buttons so beautifully.

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angelita26 June 12 2014, 03:59:43 UTC
You're very welcome! I had been thinking of a 'back from the dead' story and your prompt just made me want to share it here. The idea of Peter giving Neal's eulogy and then Neal is standing there - my heart skips a beat. Thank you!!

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