We All Fall Down

May 15, 2010 18:01


Companion to  Came Tumbling After written by the brilliant melfice

Title: We All Fall Down
Pairing: Dean/Castiel
Characters: Dean, Castiel, Sam
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: 5x18
Word Count: 863
Author's Note: Uh...I read that fic by her and I was like, "Um...shit. I need to write something now." And ended up writing a companion. Hopefully this doesn't offend her ( Read more... )

demons, sam, slash, castiel, dean

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melfice May 15 2010, 22:42:25 UTC
First of all, so amazing of you to write this. Second, I love the imagery you've described here - very powerful. I'm surprised that my favorite part is with Sam there at the end. Something about it just sums everything up so nicely. Go Team Free Will!

And thanks for sharing this :]

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angelic_x_demon May 15 2010, 23:32:17 UTC
Thank you! I like the Sam part too, but then I've always had a soft spot for Dean/Castiel with a side of Sam being just awesome and deep.
Go Team Free Will, indeed!

You're welcome! I'm glad you like it!

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samjohnsson May 16 2010, 03:29:09 UTC
Definitely a solid companion! Thank you!

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angelic_x_demon May 21 2010, 03:39:10 UTC
No, thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed!

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gleeker13 May 17 2010, 03:08:45 UTC
Oh, so much wonderful, wonderful words. Really, they're so powerful and breif but they express so much. I was reading this and feeling the emotion of the boys, all three of them, and it was absolutely great. You did a great job and I really need more adjectives because I just want to keep saying wonderful.

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angelic_x_demon May 21 2010, 03:40:22 UTC
*blushes*

This comment just made me smile so much my cheeks hurt. I think this is my shortest oneshot and my most angsty I guess so I'm glad it worked! Thank you so much!

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888mph May 19 2010, 22:04:36 UTC
Very good companion fic and what a great ending. I was afraid you had gone all happy ending, so I'm very glad to know you didn't. Perfect.

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angelic_x_demon May 21 2010, 03:42:43 UTC
Oh, no. I couldn't make it completely happy. It just wouldn't work. I just added a bit of hope and then put Sam in to make it depressing again.

Thank you so much!

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bigkittychan June 3 2010, 05:55:11 UTC
Oh man. This is utterly beautiful. I love the image of Cas reaching up with his fingers through the button holes on Dean's shirt. Its desperate imagery and I love it.

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angelic_x_demon June 3 2010, 14:20:15 UTC
Ah, thank you! I love picturing it. I can just see in my mind's eye Cas with his long, pretty fingers, threading them through the button holes.

I'm kinda obsessed with Misha Collin's fingers.

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