ficlet: the clouds were singing a song - eli stone - pg

[angelgazing]

title: The Clouds Were Singing a Song
rating: Pg
fandom: Eli Stone
summary: Lines are blurring even more for Eli, which is saying something.
notes: Thankies to luzdeestrellas for the beta, as always. The commas have missed us, I think. And thanks to sleepismyfriend for listening to me flail.

Comments

[deanine]

Interesting, and lovely.

I don't know if I really like the stream of consciousness thing you were doing. I think I get what you were going for, but it wasn't entirely successful.

Sequel!

[angelgazing]

Thank you. :)

[nobleplatypus]

Oh, stream of consciousness. I feel like I don't know quite what's going on, but darn if I don't know enough to be squeeful. Then again, it's particularly tricky when you're dealing with a character who's hallucinating some of the time, anyway. :P But I think you did a great job with it! This made me grin stupidly at the front desk. :D

[angelgazing]

I don't think Eli knows quite what's going on, some of the time. lol So thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[sleepismyfriend]

Hey! That's me!!

I sure do listen to you flail a lot. Yup. Sure do. ::grins::

[angelgazing]

That is you, and shut up, you know you like listening to me. You know.

[danamulder]

Lovely! This is the first Eli fic I've read (I'm writing one at the moment), and it was great. Very Eli. Very Maggie. Which means I loved it, because I love them. :D

[angelgazing]

Thank you so much!

lol I love them too, so I'm glad that I managed to get it to be, well, them. :D