Apple Flower

[angelfire205]

(just another midnight reminder that words fit together into funny things! and ummm, Marisa complained that I don't write poetry much anymore... so I up out of bed and wrote away, if you do read my poetry, pleas comment if you could, because, well I didn't think anyone ever really read it... thanks

Comments

[auroter]

aw, that's sweet/pretty. You put too many e's on be on the second line of the third stanza though ~_^

I like it. that's a good point about newton and the apple. One doesn't think of gravity as much when something is floating gently. Moreover, we need something to come crashing down heavily. And I like the tree symbolism in the last line. I miss you, dude! Pass me your schedule somehow so I can call you!

this is dave

[aceofspades13]

i'm commenting to tell you i do not read your poetry, even if it contains gravity or what i would be in another life, or anything. =P

you should write more poetry, even if no one reads it!

on another note; i agree, i'd be a tree in another life... heh if i tried to explain why, it'd be as sappy as your poetry!

Re: this is dave

[angelfire205]

is it realy that sappy?
oh and ... that was dave?

Re: this is dave

[greymattre]

haha, sappy tree.