angelfiends Ficlet Exchange Gift for benobsessed: A New Kind of Game

Nov 21, 2009 01:26

Well, here is my gift for benobsessed for the Ficlet Exchange. Something I didn't think I could write - but I did it!

Title: A New Kind of Game
Author: Carol Anne Caiafa
Gift For: benobsessedDisclaimer: Don’t own ‘em, no profit, suing is futile ( Read more... )

john/amanda/zep, ficlet exchange, zep/amanda, sweetcarolanne, fic

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benobsessed November 20 2009, 13:19:45 UTC
I love it hunny!

Thanks so much for pushing your own boundaries *hugs*

I'm so glad Zep finally got what he wanted :)

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sweetcarolanne November 20 2009, 20:41:55 UTC
Thanks so much, sweetie! *hugs back* It wasn't hard to write once I got the plot premise in my head. Still not my kink, though - I much prefer dominant Amanda - but it wasn't as squicky for me to do as I thought, and it was kind of fun to try something new.

I am so thrilled that you liked it! <3

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8abbott_of_odd0 November 21 2009, 06:40:26 UTC
I thought this was really delightful :D

Considering the kind of relationship and trust you've established between Amanda and Zep, I could imagine her being willing to allow this level of submission. Besides, it was done out of love, which makes it all the more beautiful. I personally don't care about the gender of the dominant or submissive partner, but considering that this is something that usually squicks you it makes an already excellent fic all the more astounding. John also got a good distraction from his suffering :D

I need to check out some of the other fics in this comm!

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sweetcarolanne November 21 2009, 20:52:46 UTC
Thank you - I'm glad you liked it! :D

Yes, this kind of thing usually is one of my biggest squicks, but I was able to write it on this level. I don't think I could ever do a permanently submissive Amanda though!

And I hope you'll like the other fics here. It's a small community but one of the more active Saw fanfic comms around.

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8abbott_of_odd0 November 22 2009, 06:12:09 UTC
I don't think I could imagine a permanently submissive Amanda. Well, I could imagine her doing whatever John asks of her, as she's just so devoted, but I think John would prefer her in an equal or dominant role, both due to his sickness and as he's trying to mould her into a powerful successor.

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sweetcarolanne November 22 2009, 06:29:49 UTC
I pretty much see her the same way, actually. :D

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brittania520 November 21 2009, 09:30:36 UTC
Long time lurker, first time commenter.

That was great. I liked how Amanda made her little rules before hand; trying something new, yet not wanting to switch roles completely.

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sweetcarolanne November 21 2009, 20:54:05 UTC
Wow, nice to see a new person here! Welcome!

And thank you - I am glad you enjoyed the fic! I usually write slash and female dominant het so this is definitely not my kink, but it was interesting to write.

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trollwinter November 24 2009, 11:49:25 UTC
WOW, Amanda!
It was so nice of her to give Zep a bit of control! Though I can hardly imagine her as a sub:D
Love it!

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sweetcarolanne November 24 2009, 19:59:33 UTC
Thank you - glad you liked it! :D I too don't see Amanda as permanently submissive, but it's just a nice thing she wanted to do for Zep just this once.

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