This is so heartwrenching in it's execution. The way you write this, I want so badly to understand why exactly Jesse acted that way (was it all the film or a lot just him?) but I'm more worried about Andrew seeing him and talking to him. And poor, wonderful Garrett.
I really love this :) I like how Garrett and Andrew fit. Jesse reminds me of my past relationship that though I think about him, I am really glad we are done because it just wasn't healthy for me
the self-destructiveness of Jesse and Andrew's old relationship combined with the sweetness of Garrett and Andrew's relationship is killing me ;___; Can't wait to see how Andrew seeing Jesse again plays out.
Oh man. This is playing on emotions I didn't know I had. On one hand I'm still loyal to Andrew/Jesse but then on the other you make Garrett so much kinder and sweeter and generally the better choice and I just don't know how I want this to go. Then I start thinking about all the possible reasons that Andrew and Jesse's relationship was that way and my heart and brain simultaneously shrivel into nothingness. Ugh. Really looking forward to the next part.
Fuuuuuuck. This is so raw and lovely. I love the way you cut between the present and flashbacks, it feels seamless and it's really moving. I hope Andrew and Jesse tread carefully with each other. Jesse seems to be aware that he's bad for Andrew so I hope he doesn't take advantage of Andrew's inner masochist. But I bet it'll be hard with sweet ol' Garrett so far away...
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And poor, wonderful Garrett.
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Really loving it!! ♥
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