[FIC] Acceptance

[anesthesiagirl]

Title: Acceptance
Pairing: Ryan/OF; Colin/Brad; Ryan/Colin; Brad/OF......eh, you get the point!
Rating: NC-17
Summary: My first attempt at writing in the first person. This is somewhat AU and may even spawn further pieces.
Disclaimer: I don't own anyone except Liz and my own imagination!

Special thanks to makingamochrie for the quick beta and the glowing

Comments

[makingamochrie]

I'm going to add my glowing feedback here right now. This is one of THE hottest sex scenes I've ever read, and is going to the top of my list in fics that I will read again and again and again. I absolutely love Liz, and I absolutely adore the Ryan/Colin relationship in this story. And as my highest criteria for how I "rate" a fic is how it leaves me feeling at the end, and this one left me feeling that wonderful emotional jumble that I adore when reading.

This was an outstanding bit of storytelling, and I'm honored to have been able to read it (again and again) before it was posted. God DAMN but I love this story! And I want to hear from Liz again.

You did great, woman. Just fucking great.

[anesthesiagirl]

well, since i don't think that it's possible for me to thank you enough for your review of this, i'll do it again!!!!!! and i love your idea of a continuation.....remind me of that again in a few weeks and it might just happen!

thanks again chica!

[skookchick]

I am in awe, literally stunned speechless! I have not been in lust with a piece of writing before as much as I am with this piece. I just don't know what to say!

[anesthesiagirl]

i'll take that as a compliment! thanks for reading! :)

[sungreen70]

***fans self*** WOW. Just... wow. I LOVED the complexity of the relationships in this. They came off so believably, all of them. And the sex scene was amazing. Great narrative voice, too. Thank you for writing this!

[anesthesiagirl]

wow, thanks so much for the review. man, i could write forever about how complex that set of relationships would be!!! thanks again for reading! :)

[clayangel]

Well... I really liked that story. I loved the feel of it-the pacing and general tone were really good. And Liz was fantastic. Her somber acceptance of everything was not only interesting to read, but lent a smooth cadence to the story that I really liked.

*snickers* And yay for foursomes. ^____^

But... but... Ryan and Colin are such assholes! ^_^ I hate the fact that they'd do what they're doing to the people they love. It's just cruel. Kind of like "Oh, yeah, I love you... but I love him more." To get that rubbed in your face has got to hurt pretty badly.

Which is not a negative comment on your writing at all... just being pissy with those characters. Though I think they were done rather well. Liz's nonchalance was also a really good foil to Brad's pissiness.

[anesthesiagirl]

But... but... Ryan and Colin are such assholes! -that made me laugh. it certainly wasn't my intention......but, now that i look at it, i guess they are kinda being assholes. but it would be even sadder if they can't/won't be together, but won't let themselves be with anyone else either....right?!?

i think i like liz because i could make her up as i went along......no molds or personality traits i had to try to fit into. and i'm not sure brad is pissy so much as very sad.

thanks for reading and your feedback!

[purwliia]

Wow, a foursome. Really a scene to imagine that's for sure ;-). Always love your style of writing, so powerful.

[anesthesiagirl]

thanks so much! foursomes are hard......don't want anyone getting shortchanged on the action! :D