New Castle Fic: everlasting light, r

[andymcnope]

Title: everlasting light
Author: shipperfey
Summary: TextsFromLastNight fic-a-thon prompt: (304): I love you more than champagne and correct grammar (endearingquirk). Castle, Beckett, outdoor sexing, and absolutely no plot.
Spoilers: 3x22, if any.
Pairing/Characters: Castle/Beckett
Rating: R/M

Comments

[relaxjolene]

ASDFKLAJSKLJWLRKJASDF FINGERS.

Just kidding, but only sort of.

She turns to face him, and he knows she's glaring at him from behind the dark shades. "I noticed," she offers. "I'm a cop, it's my job to notice. Even out here."
This bit made me lol because it's so like her to throw her cop-ness around like that. Such a badass.

And then their banter was oh-so-fucking-perfect, and I know it took you forever to flesh this out (yes, I'm still loling at that), but omg I'm so glad you did.

Also, I love it when you write shameless porn, because you do it in such a way that is just so...idek, it's still intrinsically them. It's perfect and wonderful and sexy and just everything I ever wish I could write - even when you struggle. SO THERE.

I HATE YOU A LITTLE BIT.

-If you don't know what that means by now, we have problems.

[andymcnope]

Just kidding, but only sort of.
I was thinking of you when I had him put them there. seriously not even trying to out-awkward you, it's just spilling out

And then their banter was oh-so-fucking-perfect, and I know it took you forever to flesh this out (yes, I'm still loling at that), but omg I'm so glad you did.
ILU and still giggling at that too.

It's perfect and wonderful and sexy and just everything I ever wish I could write - even when you struggle. SO THERE.
I hate you and I love you, and I seriously will get you to write C/B porn someday, and it will be glorious and make me hate life for a little bit, and then I will print it, and frame it.

[sunshine_minx]

The more of these I read, the harder it is to form coherent thoughts with which to write a comment.

Wow. Nicely done, and who needs plot, because...wow. I loved it. And you caught them both really well. I could hear them, and it was lovely.

[andymcnope]

Thank you, hon! *hugs*

[sparkles_mouse]

I love you guys. I don't say it enough (or do I say it too often?) but I do. I'm really lazy. Like I go to work and sit down and bullshit all day. Today I worked so much my brain exploded. So luckily I got to read this on the bus to unwind on a Friday (and by some strange - or not so strange - coincidence the driver turned the AC on at a very sexy moment. It's like he reads me!)

Things I loved: her editing his book. You didn't have to write sex because to me that is so sexy. That she worshipped him as a writer and now she sleeps with him and has no problem marking his shit up like a pro. Seriously. I'm in love with writers. So this idea is just beautiful and brilliant and perfect to me.

The line on the plane where he says she makes him a better writer. I might have verbally aw'ed. On a bus. With people. Yeah, people don't think I'm crazy at all.

Their banter while editing. Fucking genius. Marry me. (That's part Arrested Development line and part truth. To make me seem saner, it's just quoting.)

And you guys and your sex writing. You're

[sunshine_minx]

Hey, Sparkles!

I love your icon. :)

[sharp2799]

Don't ask me why but I thought this was rated PG and then I started reading. LMAO!

Hot. As. Hell.

[tinlizzie82]

Yum! I love how this meme has been quite nice for inspiring Castle porn and this is a particularly tasty example.