New Chapter: Earth Rain - Book III, 30/?, BSG, K/L, NC-17

[andymcnope]

Title: Earth Rain
Author: Alice J. Foster (a.k.a. shipperfey)

Book III

| For Books I, II, and previous chapters, go here |

| Chapter 28 | Chapter 29 | Chapter 30 | Chapter 31 | Chapter 32 |
| Chapter 33 | Chapter 34 | Chapter 35 | Chapter 36 |
| Chapter 37 | Chapter 38 | Chapter 39 | Chapter 40 | Epilogue |

Summary: In the present, Kara, Lee and Aria

Comments

[arielmoondance]

omg! yay!! I am so excited to see you updated this fic!!!

*happy dance*

[andymcnope]

Than you hon,

I'm planning to keep working on it-- I finished one of the WIPs I was working on (the short one for 30Rock) and since I've been on a writing binge, I've been splitting my time between Earth Rain and a House WIP I've been working on for 2 yrs... not sure which one will be done first, but I got 8+ chapters written for both.

[dramaticgrl]

Yay for updates! I'm glad your muse seems to have cooperated with you lately :)

[andymcnope]

Me too. She's still quiet and distant, but every once in a while she lets me write a page or two :)

[maclau]

THANK YOU for the ShipperFey fix i needed :D
hehehe i love it, this one is going pretty damn good.
i like the idea of Aria being a pain in the ass for Kara somehow, just as real as real life. Cycles of life bring payback as a bitch.

Pretty cool! Keep posting!! i need my fix :D

[andymcnope]

:D

I aim to please.

Aria was such a well-behaved, precocious child in Books I and II, that I just had to let her bratty (Starbuck-y) side come out and play :)

[anastashial]

I love it. So glad to see Bill making this connection and the disappointing Dad as punishment is priceless.

[andymcnope]

I feel that Kara would suck at punishing the kids herself, 'cause she knows just how much "regular" punishments don't work, they just make one more rebellious.

And writing Bill and Laura were a big reason why I wanted this book :) I adore them.

[antismiles]

OMGs, another update so soon? Yay!

I'm so in love with this chapter, especially the part about disappointing Dad. My mother was always able to keep me somewhat in line if she alluded to my father, so I understand how Aria feels. :)

Can't wait for the rest of this fic! I wanna know Lee's reaction to finding out he's going to be a father again. That should be interesting... ;)

[andymcnope]

Yeah, feedback feeds the muse, so I'm hoping that by posting the "core" beginning chapters, I'll be able to get more done :)

(we'll see if it works)