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andsheloves

moving, or five times she knew she loved him

Jan 28, 2007 14:14

Title: Moving, or Five Times She Knew She Loved Him
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Not mine, I wish. If it were mine, no one would've died, and Mal would permanently be shirtless. Just playing. Shiny.
Summary: He’s moving towards her now, and she can’t do anything to stop him. Technically, she could move out of the way, or push him away, or a number of ( Read more... )

movie: serenity, writing, tv: firefly, them: mal/inara, tv/movie: serenifly

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ceslas January 28 2007, 04:03:51 UTC

“Darlin’, it’s always about you.”
Nice series. I like how you touch on their desires and their difficulties without diminishing either.

andsheloves January 28 2007, 04:08:38 UTC

Thanks. :)

agentgoodnight January 28 2007, 06:08:44 UTC

I tink you've just written a famous line, from the looks of things,

“Darlin’, it’s always about you.”

You're amazing and that has to be one of my favourite fics. Phenomenal job :)

And I still can't get over the cap ou pas cap thing. J'aime Julien + Sophie.

andsheloves January 28 2007, 07:31:27 UTC

That's maybe the best compliment of my life.
Thank you, so much. *g*

I know, I love that movie. :)

goose_juggler January 30 2007, 03:26:34 UTC

I tink you've just written a famous line, from the looks of things,

“Darlin’, it’s always about you.”

Agreed!

andsheloves January 30 2007, 22:02:58 UTC

Thanks. :)

_atmospheric January 28 2007, 18:10:55 UTC

*spaz* It's so awesome, hon! And I love that you added the definition at the beginning. It's great! :D

andsheloves January 29 2007, 09:31:33 UTC

Aw, thanks! *huggles*

Did you get the beta'd version back of yours?

_atmospheric January 31 2007, 00:43:55 UTC

I did! All the corrections were *awesome.* I made the changes before I posted the finished fic- thank you soooo much for beta-ing!!! *hugs*

andsheloves January 31 2007, 00:49:40 UTC

Yaiy!
No problem, thanks for doing mine! Go team!!!

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kaynara January 30 2007, 00:21:24 UTC

The look on his face just made her more exasperated. Something between his usual “utter fool” and his occasional “complete idiot”, she couldn’t quite put her finger on it.

Oh, yes, I can see that thought going through her head! Nice job.

andsheloves January 30 2007, 01:07:59 UTC

Thanks. *g*

greyfable January 31 2007, 04:49:08 UTC

There is something striking about number two and how we don't know what they are arguing about. I also liked the fifth one a lot. Thanks for the fic!

andsheloves January 31 2007, 22:24:15 UTC

No problem, thanks for the lovely comment. :)