Comments | andsheloves: light in a dark place

andsheloves

light in a dark place

Jun 24, 2007 22:33

Title: Candlelight
Rating: PG
Summary: The candle's flame flickered in the darkness.
Author's Notes: Written for Challenge 4 at unabridgedsalon, tell the story of a light in a dark place, whether literally or metaphorically.

( and she shivered from the ground )

writing, original fiction

Comments 9

bichito June 24 2007, 15:41:27 UTC

Wow! That's beautiful! (yes, I know, I always start with the same line, but IT'S ALWAYS BEAUTIFUL!) Sad, but so sweet and so touching! There's any chance to have a chapter two? Maybe? Please?

andsheloves June 25 2007, 01:32:00 UTC

Thanks, hun! *hugs* Maybe? Who knows. *g*

flatlined June 24 2007, 17:02:47 UTC

WOW.amazing. sad.
I love your non fanfic fic

andsheloves June 25 2007, 01:34:48 UTC

Thanks, Michelle! *hugs*

velvet_midnight June 24 2007, 21:37:45 UTC

Very beautiful. I'd like to know the backstory of it, though, unless it's just a oneshot. Very pretty and sad.

andsheloves June 25 2007, 01:37:16 UTC

Thanks! *g*
It's kind of a one shot, but I may write more. (like a part 2, or a prologue or something?)

flatlined July 26 2007, 11:54:31 UTC

are you gonna?

I just re-read this. again
It just gets more beautiful everytime

andsheloves July 27 2007, 13:21:21 UTC

Hee, yes I am.
I'm just trying to figure out what I want to happen. Because this is my favourite story of mine, & I don't want to ruin it. :)
I have a few ideas, I just don't know how I want it to go (like, what order, & such)

Thanks hun! *hugs*

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