Enduring 2- 11 B/18(21)

[andromeda05]

Series: Enduring the Test of Time
Title: Forgive and Forget
Author: McRaider
Summary: When Rose and Ianto get caught on the sanctuary of a sacred ground, their threatened to be punished, however Jack steps in and sacrifices himself, however the sacrifice may cost them all a great deal of pain in the long run.
Author’s Note: It’s clichéd, I know, but

Comments

[luvinthe88and20]

Aww, poor Jack. The Doctor and Jack interaction just about killed me.

Wonderful job.

[andromeda05]

I'm glad you liked it, thank you. It was a recent rewrite that just was crying to exist.

[teachwriteslash]

I love the connection they have . . . 9 would say this to him. 10 - not so sure :-) You capture 9s voice really well . . . the idea that he's still got guilt over what he did and how he can relate to Jack because of it.

Jack's "I want to go home." about broke my heart.

[andromeda05]

Thank you :-)

[pfyre]

oh my poor Jack... I'm glad that the Doctor does understand and thru his understanding that Jack can gain some understanding and comfort as well... good stuff - very good stuff

[andromeda05]

Thank you

[_miss_daisy_]

That conversation was heartbreaking! The "I want to go home" bit is what got me.

And that last line the Doctor said.... It was just.... I don't really know what to say about it, but it stood out for me. There's something about that line that kind of gives me chills.

I'm looking forward to the next part!

[andromeda05]

It is a chilling piece, but I think it's true. When we allow grief to define us, we're no longer...us.

Thank you

[hab318princess]

OMG, *hugs Jack*

the rest of my brain will be in contact later

[andromeda05]

Hehe thanks!