Comments | androidmin: making eyes at you

androidmin

making eyes at you

May 12, 2015 22:15

pairing: minseok/kyungsoo
rating: nc17
length: 3532
warnings: almost sex ‘dry humping in a locker room’, annoying friends
summary: Kyungsoo is only here to install some software, but Minseok is really kind of the hottest fitness trainer.

a/n: a pinch hit for squishyfied originally posted here . i have no idea to be honest. the title comes from the black kid' ( Read more... )

exchange, xiusoo

Comments 12

rokeby June 13 2015, 16:22:25 UTC

JUMPS OFF A CLIFF SCREAMING XIUSOO.

o h but nicole this is wonderful? ;; lmao i wanted to run your baekhyun over with a tractor, which means he was superb! i loved your characterization of everyone ;; pmsl yixing would call his company "unicorn" and the imagery of minseok in work out clothes had me reeling.

lovE THIS<3

androidmin June 21 2015, 02:47:27 UTC

oh vibeke thank you ;;;

i always love writing baek for this reason!! lol yes i was like "kim bros and um--unicorn??"
YEAH XM IN WORKOUT GEAR ;;;

thank you for your kind words ^-^

shinealightrose June 14 2015, 02:39:47 UTC

Ahh! I read this on Squishyfied (lol did you give up waiting for the 'reveals' ? I'm about ready to as well).

This is still so much fun!

androidmin June 21 2015, 02:48:30 UTC

YEAH I SAW UR COMMENT THANK YOU SO MUCH <3

its been over a month, i think we're safe lol ^-^
but thank you so much for reading and commenting!!

read0write June 14 2015, 08:27:34 UTC

aww~ cute ^^
that was adorable though that locker room part ;)

androidmin June 21 2015, 02:49:41 UTC

yes the locker room....omg

thank you so much for leaving a comment !!

fixedstar0328 June 15 2015, 14:37:19 UTC

ASDFGHJKL HOT!

androidmin June 21 2015, 02:50:10 UTC

lmao THANKS FOR THINKING SO

thank you for the comment ^^

carcharias1130 June 16 2015, 11:36:13 UTC

this was super hot; loved the confidence and yet kinda-awkwardness you gave them both. Made them seem like they both know what they want, but are still somewhat realistic. Also, loved the interactions between Kyungsoo, Baekhyun, and Yixing. Your writing style here is also really fun and kinda choppy, in a good way! Like, it has this nice rhythm with short, surprising bits and a natural flow. (I'm probably not making sense).

Anyway, thanks so much for posting!! The world needs more xiusoo. <3

androidmin June 21 2015, 05:02:46 UTC

yeah!! i think theyre both pretty sure of what they want but theres still definitely some kind of reservation.
oh wow ;; thank you for thinking so!! xiusoo is new to me, and i really struggle with flow i think so i'm super stoked that you liked my style here ;;

thank you so much for your feedback and taking the time to read ^-^