wild eyed turning ’til we’re running from it

[androidmin]

pairing: minseok/sehun
length:6839
rating: pg13
warnings: alcohol use
summary:Sehun’s bucket list takes him to Tokyo and coincidentally, Minseok.
a/n: originally written for ohunlimited here. title from beach house's "take care". thanks a ton to j and t for helping me out when i whined a ton. padlet of inspiration here

Comments

[tokkai]

This is absolutely gorgeous, but a little hard to read. It reminded me of a book series I read years ago (wicked lovely).
The characterisation was brilliant, the whole seelie/fae idea caught me off guard but i loved it nonetheless. As much as I could see it through the hints, I think when Minseok spoke about it it was strange to me (I dont know how to express the feeling...maybe im just tired haha)
But i think my favourite part was how Minseok and Sehun just slowly melted into each other, how their relationship just developed naturally and ended knowing that they were together but never needing that blatant show of romance.

The flow and prose was so perfect and lovely. I loved it & will probably read again tomorrow when its not 1am.

sorry if my comment makes no sense, i just really liked this...

[androidmin]

i actually read those in hs!!! so i definitely drew from the imagery i remembered honestly (but also holly black novels) ;;
ahh i'm actually glad you said that!! i think my style is kinda.haha...and i definitely need to hammer out still. this was also written very....different!!
i kinda wanted to make the seelie/fae thing be...not separated? i'm not sure how to explain but ahhhh i'm glad you liked it <3
i wanted them to have a deeper connection that drew them together and i'm glad it worked.

im honestly super duper excited for this comment and wow thank you a lot???
i really appreciate this ^^

[sergeantboombox]

This was perfect omg thanks sooooomuch for sharing ugh ugly sobbing

[androidmin]

thank you soooo much for reading and commenting really ^-^

[blueminnuet]

oh, I remember reading this fic on the comm and never got a change to leave a comment, so here's a belated one, sorry!
I enjoyed reading this so much and while the fantasy elements came quite unexpected, it made the story stand out from most of the others i've read? So that was great, and funny enough, after reading this i went around japan picturing the scenes you wrote, so that's the impact this fic made on me. <3 great job, btw.