i just wanna say you're mine, you're mine
pairing: sehun/xiumin
rating: nc17
length: 2460
summary: Minseok isn't good with words.
warnings: sex, self beta'd
a/n: im really late ;;
written for the sexiu v-day fest.title from beyonce's (ft drake) "mine"
( “Hyung,” Sehun’s voice startles Minseok. “Hyung, hyung, wake up.” )
rating: nc17
length: 2460
summary: Minseok isn't good with words.
warnings: sex, self beta'd
a/n: im really late ;;
written for the sexiu v-day fest.title from beyonce's (ft drake) "mine"
( “Hyung,” Sehun’s voice startles Minseok. “Hyung, hyung, wake up.” )
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He always feels a particular need to indulge the younger, take extra care to listen. Earlier that day he’d watched carefully how Sehun had struggled with the choreography, frustration marring his face. He was intent to get it right, until Minseok had come in, guided his body in the right direction.
//weeeps because YES
okay hold on im going to quote a fucking long section and im sorry but its //perfect//
“Oh, shit,” Minseok whispers pulling back, watching Sehun’s unmoving face ( ... )
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\\\\\everything is always a mush of FEELINGS THATS ALL I CAN WRITE TBH//
im so glad you liked i!!! sexiu dynamics, im still new too but i love the /take care of u kinda thing they have but also sehun saying what he wants
my noodle baby ;;
thank you for hosting such a lovely fest!!!!!
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i loved how you wrote the entire thing, even the part where sehun finishes first. this just makes their new and raw relationship even more believable. thumbs up and great job!
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/good emotional distress/
thank you so much for enjoying ;;;;;;;;;
and commenting ^^
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minseok is so soft with sehuna which I ABSOLUTELY ADORE SO MUCH and how he was the one who kisses him first I WAS FLAILING ABOUT THAT AND HE WAS LIKE SHIT HE ISN'T KISSING ME BAAAAAACK
sehuna who wants minseok so much and neither of them are good with words but they figure it out!!!!!!!
BESOS BECAUSE THIS IS JUST SPECTACULAR
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'who is this!!!!'
oh gosh yes softseok is a good seok,
im so glad you enjoyed, gracias for this lovely comment <3
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just just just. first time sexies, first time kissies, first tIM e con feS s ions thATS SO DAMN CUUUUUUUUUUUUUTE
Minseok’s scalp tingles, and he realizes Sehun isn’t kissing back. no ooOO OOoo oo oo yoU FRICKEN FISH, SEHUN KISS THE DAMN BOY BACK HAVEN'T YOU EVER WATCHED THE LITTLE MERMAID YOU GOTTA KISS THE BOY OR YOU'LL MISS THE BOOOOOOOY
“But, do you like me?” are you waiting for him to say he likes likes you HE KISSED YOU AND INDULGES YOU HE LOOoOoOOooOVES YOU
"...I more than--I more than like you Sehun.” there he said the words 'i like like you. NOW KISS HIM BACK AND MAKE THE WORLD HAPPY AGAIN
“Can I sleep with you tonight?” WINK WONK
"You can touch me," Minseok whispers between them, "its okay." SO MANY WINKS IM BLINKING
“Let me know when you want me to stop, yeah?” minseok babying the baby got me like ;;;;;;;;;;;;
“I know,” Sehun says, “I know how to do this.” oh. ohoho. ohoHOHOHHOHOO.
Minseok doesn’t think his heart will ever learn to stop ( ... )
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this comment is honestly, your commentary makes me so happy ;;
you are too /clenches fist/ thank you bb ;;
"no ooOO OOoo oo oo yoU FRICKEN FISH, SEHUN KISS THE DAMN BOY BACK HAVEN'T YOU EVER WATCHED THE LITTLE MERMAID YOU GOTTA KISS THE BOY OR YOU'LL MISS THE BOOOOOOOY"
im gonna have to sit down and file this away omg
<3
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It was like shy but comfortable because they know each other even if this is a new boundary for them and just...ah, it was nice.
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YES that was my main goal, and im glad it came across well
thank you for reading and commenting ^-^
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