I've been told to try 'creative writing' more

[andrewcardall]

This is not really a story, per se, but instead it's a recounting of what it is like to sit by the water's edge before sunrise in Wexford. This is what I do after work these days, as I mentioned previously. Anyway, here it goes

Comments

[sg_freelancer]

Argh! I responded to this and LJ messed up.

Anyway, I used to be one of those "delivery guys", getting up at all hours of the morning. :( I think you got the entire atmosphere of those early mornings fairly spot on. I think, what I always remember is how quickly it can go from darkness to bright. You can often be caught of guard by the change, unless you're paying attention.

Nice writing! :)

[svenjaliv]

Router works! :D

I like this, you described Wexford really well. Not the town as a place, but the atmosphere. I don't see many early mornings, but I do know how they are. :( So yeah, nice writing, very... evocative. :o The only thing is, you've switched tenses a bit, in places. :( I notice these things. :(

[sg_freelancer]

Just kidding! I probably wouldn't even have noticed that if you didn't point it out. Well done, Svenja, well done! :(

What a loser! :(

You want tense? Go stand between a man with a gun, and the man he's pointing it at!!!

[andrewcardall]

Tenses are for English students :(

It was very spur of the moment, and rushed, so yeah :( Didn't proof read :D